Marilyn

pjtorres

hi all,

this is the character i've done for a contest in artbypapercut forums (showdown). the contest is finish.

the total polycount of the character including the weapon and fx is @12000 polis and 2k textures( diffuse, normal map, specular map, alpha)

so all critics and comments are thankful for me

neilberard

That looks great!

Johan3043

Wow! This looks awesome! Great work! I am thinking about making my own character, could i please add you on steam or skype for some advice etc?

[HP]

Loving the folds on the cloth, slightly exaggerated really gives it a nice look. Great piece.

Tits

Pretty awesome stuff!
If i can give a very simple critics. I would say the amount of triangle is pretty high on the gun, especially when you see that the shoulder would have really love some more since you can really feel them on the silhouette!
I think the hands in the high resolution are looking very good, but when you position the hand that is not holding the gun, the thumbs looks a bit misplaced.
But i'm not the best person to give advice,
pretty sick work

El Scorcho

Sexy stuff man, agree with Tits feedback. I also think you could use a lighter background with some color too maybe. Some of her joints are getting that cg model bent effect, you could move some geo after you pose to fix that. Maybe a little more facial expression and a little more lighting work to soften her face some. Keep up the awesome.

pjtorres

neilberard, johan3043, [hp] : thank you very much guys

tits: everybody can critic, so i'm grateful you did it. the pose i did for the contest are so quickly so have some errors like hands and fingers

El Scorcho: thank you very much


Edit for fix that I want mean that everybody can critic not anybody must critic (fail :P)

pjtorres

some views of high mesh

demilich

this is just badass.

pjtorres

thanks demilich

Skillmister

Really nice proportions. Final thing looks great!

almighty_gir

you need to clean up the diffuse texture around her lips man... looks like she's been having fun with a chimneysweep.

pjtorres

thanks skillmister

thanks you too almighty_gir :P

pjtorres

Hi all,

This is a re-rendering of Marilyn in Unity done by Technical artist David Miranda: http://dmg3d.blogspot.com.es/

you can it see here:
http://dmg3d.blogspot.com.es/2013/04/marilyn-pedro-jose-torres.html