Z brush model_need advice

YellowSub

An attempt to model a picture on digital-art-gallery by Sujin Oh for practice purposes.
I know it's lacking in many aspects, especially the hair (I'm sort of confused what to do with the hair).. critiques&comments are greatly appreciated.

gHys

i like it! only the mouth have some major issue , it feel empty behind the lips and it's not into a relax or smile pose, kinda odd.

i saw the reference and you just made an european version of it.

-smaller flower
-cheekbones pronounced
-nose shape straight and not curve, check it out on kid's nose or asian nose
-forehead it's different check it out too

btw i like it! keep going!

on the hair use more subtool to make the little one and make them yellowish desaturated ofc but near warm yellow

YellowSub

Hi. thanks for your advice and kind words you're too kind!
yup I started to sculpt each part and suddenly it turned out very differently as a whole from the real image. need to pay much more close attention to the whole (I often caught up concentrating on details that I forget the whole composition).
have any suggestion on the subtool? I used Curve Tube and Slash3 but probably there are better tool that works for hair.