Springfield Rifle.

ttham · Dec 2012

Hi all.
4450 tris
2048x2048 texture
Xoliulshader 2.0
I really need fresh opinion, because i'm kinda stuck in my creative progress(i don't know how to say it right), and i don't know what to do next to improve my skills.

emrfish6 · Dec 2012

That looks amazing. I wish I had talent like that.

BertR · Dec 2012

Wow the wood and metal parts work out very nice! Pretty inspiring ^^
There's a little n-gon at the bottom of the stock you might want to get rid of (Doesn't look planar at first sight).

Oniram · Dec 2012

nice. clean. i dig it.

a bit too much uv space used for the bullet though.

Blaisoid · Dec 2012

looks good, although distribution of polygons seems strange. various small elements look round and nice while big parts like butt and grip feel blocky.

MainManiac · Dec 2012

damn...

Why not a blue spec map on the wood? That seems to be popular

igi · Dec 2012

There's really nice material definitions.Very nice use of small details,dents etc.Before somebody say I'm gonna mention that wood grain in the specular is mostly useless since wood grain has nothing to do with specularity,gloss covered on the wood reflect the light.Other than that its totally awesome.

Boyso · Dec 2012

The Weaver 330c controls seems to be in the wrong spot, the should next to the other lense. Unless it's a different scope?

http://www.snipercentral.com/images/m1903a4-a.jpg

Alberto Rdrgz · Dec 2012

really cool! could stand to make it a bit more high poly..

ttham · Dec 2012

Wow so many feedbacks its so awesome

emrfish6: Its not about talent mostly its hard work,just don't give up and you will be best.
BertR: ah i see thank you)
Oniram: yes i see it now.
Blaisoid: this is my kryptonite like hi poly as well)
frell:there is some blue tint but i think now its to pale.
igi:i agree with you, i just think that would be a little interesting have some details on wood there, don't rely know just my vision.
Boyso: i have this reference

i'm not rifle pro, so i do what game designer wants)
Alberto Rdrgz: i agree with you here i just afraid overpoly my model i think.
P.S. English is not my native so sorry if something wrong.

Springfield Rifle.

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