Red twin robot

mau

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Hi everyone,

This is some work I'm doing to improve my portfolio.
(Sadly, the project I was working on, was canceled )



Initial sketch :


Wireframe:



Next step will be to make an environment for it ...

C&C are of course welcome

wip:

mau

the environment concept :

Starboxx

Really nice environement, looking forward to it. I'd maybe add a bit of foliage somewhere, i feel like it misses one color. Also, you have a bit of a blue light on the right part near the tower, wich makes it have a cool look and feel like there is some kind of magic coming from under there, maybe put some of it on the left too?

Last thing is about the gear, wich is not really round, you should take care of it.

Starboxx

Oups double post.

Ulrick

Following u dude Nice work as I already said !

Bertmac

pretty cool concept i like it

n33kos

Thats a really interesting character design, Keep up the great work! I also agree with Starboxx about the blue areas.

The concept environment looks great but I feel like it could be a bit more cohesive. The character has a mechanical/magical hybrid feel, for me it would pull things together more to emphasize the "glowing magical bus lines" theme in the gears and piping on the left side of the concept. Aside form that it looks excellent.

bbrem123

wow love the character design. Great work!

mau

thanks everyone
I've retake a little the concept, but I don't want to push it too further it's just to help me starting mod.

I'll post WIP of 3D in few days

mau

wip :

mau

Long time I haven't post, shame on me : /
Here some new :

Still lot to do

Ulrick

Really nice color balance, and as I said: Fan of your tree render on the right.

The little problem is that your "tree-portal-gate" is much less bumpy.
There's no big volume or sharp highlight on it, compares to the tree on the right.
As if it doesn't have normal and specular maps

Can't wait to see the next WIP

Add3r

I completely agree with Ulrick, the right tree is awesome, and completely overpowers the tree gate, which in sense should be one of the focal points. I think it could use some tweaking from the concept. I feel since it is more of a gate, that it should symbolize more in the scene. I think if you enlarged it a little bit more, and pushed the shapes a little more, it could be really awesome.

I LOVE this scene though... oh so very much. Mad jealous of the concept It has ridiculous amounts of character and personality potential for a 3D conversion. Cant wait to see where this goes!

mau

Thx
I've done some retakes, in particular on the door like you suggested and add some light (wip)

I have to retake gear and towers, add some dirt&grass and more stuffs like that ... stay thune

LuCh!

cool stuff, I like,
can you show your texture maps off the enviro?

Di$array

This is looking great and I'm loving the texture detail. But I think that tree need to bend more to suit the over exaggerated proportation of the concept.

mau

Hop some news :



Di$array: thx you're right I'll try to blend it a little more


LuCh! :thx , Here some textures maps :

Mark Dygert

This... looks awesome!

Jeff Parrott

Really like this! Nice job.

Bricks in the back towers look stretched a bit. Otherwise great job on this. Love the style.

BoBo_the_seal

love this! Very well done!

- BoBo

toxic_h2o

those textures are great! so cool.

aajohnny

This is fantastic so far! keep going I'm watching you 8)

Hazardous

Awesome man love this! I would be curious to see a side by side with and without normals though - the painted textures look brilliant by themselves!

mau

Thanks you everyone !! :poly139:

This is probably the last time I update this environment

I try to correct every things you notice previously.
The twisted bricks, I blend the tree a little more, I've also make the scene brighter and add a outline to have a stronger cartoon render (Marmoset toolbag is such a great tool !)



Hazardous: I've done this for you but the result is not that interesting without dynamic light
Without and with normal maps

GabrielP

I wish the scene was a touch brighter to better show off your textures. youll notice inthe concept the door is pushing a light more light out. in the model the light is pretty much limited to things really close to the opening.

Snader

I don't quite agree, mau, as the last image definitely shows a difference between left and right. Creases in particular are a lot stronger on the right-hand image, which I presume is the one with normals.