I'm not much of an "anatomy guy," but I'm seeing something that looks off to me. The abdominal muscles should start right under the pecs. There should not be a rib-cage shape separating the two. Or maybe I'm interpreting it as a ribcage and you intended it to be abs? If that's the case the abs shouldn't blend right into the ribcage like you have it. The reference image Howl posted shows the separation I'm referring to.
But like I said, I'm not exactly an expert on the subject so I could be off
Wow.. guys thank you so much for taking the time to really point things out especially to Howl who made extra effort to help a fellow artist. Tobbbo & HitmonInfinity thanks also. Very much appreciated. I'll sure work on your feedback
No nips and belly button? It's hard to tell with the cape, but it looks like your running into the same problem with the hammies as you did with the tris.
No nips and belly button? It's hard to tell with the cape, but it looks like your running into the same problem with the hammies as you did with the tris.
Acknowledged. I'll be fixing stuffs based on the pointers I've collected from you guys. thanks
saw your work. awesome stuffs you got there.:thumbup:
Here is the revised model based from the collected comments of this thread. Removed other things except the body to have a better view. Comments will always be welcome
One thing you did not capture is the pecs, his pecs in the film are very flat on the top and have a bunch of bumps where it connects to the sternum. http://literalbarrage.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2007/03/leonidas.jpg
They are also flatter and more angular.
The butt looks weird too.
keep it up.
Hey nice work, here's some stuff that you could fix
-The hamstrings just above the knees are currently bulging out, the mass should actually be higher near the glutes. When Alex says the butt looks weird, part of the problem comes from this and the missing insertion point of the gluteus.
-The knees should be wider (the heads of the bones underneath are quite bigger, specifically the tibia)
-When seen from the back, the latissimus dorsi should be like a "drape" that covers the back of the ribcage and not be divided into 2 groups.
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What stands out to me the most is the shape of his triceps, as well as adding the tiny bit of space between the bicep and the elbow.
Here's a quick sketch over with some references on how I think you can push it further.
I'm not much of an "anatomy guy," but I'm seeing something that looks off to me. The abdominal muscles should start right under the pecs. There should not be a rib-cage shape separating the two. Or maybe I'm interpreting it as a ribcage and you intended it to be abs? If that's the case the abs shouldn't blend right into the ribcage like you have it. The reference image Howl posted shows the separation I'm referring to.
But like I said, I'm not exactly an expert on the subject so I could be off
Acknowledged. I'll be fixing stuffs based on the pointers I've collected from you guys. thanks
saw your work. awesome stuffs you got there.:thumbup:
They are also flatter and more angular.
The butt looks weird too.
keep it up.
-The hamstrings just above the knees are currently bulging out, the mass should actually be higher near the glutes. When Alex says the butt looks weird, part of the problem comes from this and the missing insertion point of the gluteus.
-The knees should be wider (the heads of the bones underneath are quite bigger, specifically the tibia)
-When seen from the back, the latissimus dorsi should be like a "drape" that covers the back of the ribcage and not be divided into 2 groups.