Fore-Armed Templar

whyareyoumakin1

I'm reviving an old project I stopped working on a year ago and would love some feedback. It was a character i've thought on often but never been able to see finalized and I have spent many many many hours working on him yet making little to no progress.

When I put this model down in defeat a year ago, I felt as though I was incapable of realizing the image i could see in my mind, and that I was not good enough to be a 3D artist. So I'm picking this project back up to prove to myself that time pressure and dedication produces improvement (as I am a fan of leveling up) and that i'm capable of completing the projects I set out to do. (If you've ever read the Eragon series, consider this the frustrating pebble Brom tells Eragon not to toss when he first starts to his tutoring)

With a years worth of additional practice under my belt I'm going back at it in my free time, and I hope this time around I end up with a portfolio worthy piece of art. SO lemee know what you think! I hope he turns out as cool as I envision him to be.

Thanks!
-Lucas Michel

Azaraen

Oh I really like his design! I especially like the plating on his torso. So whats this guy's description? Like what is his armor made of? He look like an alien.

I would say he needs a little more on his body (legs, arms, chest) to break up that shape. And right under his knee, it look like geo was shift. Can I see a side view? But his silhouette right now looks distinct.

I look forward to see more of this guy!