[Dota 2] - Phantom Assassin - Immortals set

iRYO400

Good day all,
Offtop:

I’m new in 2D and 3D art world, but i know that i can become a master in this
I’ve finished only one item for D2 (is here).
Let’s start now.

WIP:
At this moment mine set consists from one part, it is a weapon. Other pieces of set will be later (I mean helmet and shoulders).
[FONT="<font><font>Times New Roman</font></font>"]Weapon[/FONT]
So, I’m introducing you mine weapon’s 2D version:

First part of weapon has hammer’ form (I’m not gonna change it anyway).
Q: Why exactly this form?
A: Because this part of weapon makes critical strikes (ultimate skill).
Here are video and pictures:


Third part of weapon I can change for your ideas, that’s it.

[FONT="<font><font>Times New Roman</font></font>"]UPDATES:[/FONT]
[FONT="<font><font>Times New Roman</font></font>"]Head[/FONT]

[FONT="<font><font>Times New Roman</font></font>"]Shoulders[/FONT]

[FONT="<font><font>Times New Roman</font></font>"]Weapon[/FONT]


Your comments, suggestions and ideas are welcome!
Russian speakers are wellcom!!!

iRYO400

these all what i've done for 15 minutes of my free time

now I'll export it to ZBrush for more exact finishing of specific details!(patterns, also smoothing)

iRYO400

UPD*
Smoothed

iRYO400

Blade pieces are ready

iRYO400

blade pieces has been updated(smoothed)

iRYO400

What do you think about this?(Helmet)

shanks37

helmet seems like a cool idea and really different from anything else that been done thus far. only critique is to maybe try fewer slits and make them run horizontal. should make it a bit sleeker since it seems a little bulky now.

iRYO400

now what do you think about this?

Beezow

Vertical slits looked better in my opinion, the horizontal ones make it looks almost insect-like.

iRYO400

Middle part:

iRYO400

bottom piece:

iRYO400

Mid with bot are ready for 70%

iRYO400

Looking for a master of 2d art!

iRYO400

i draw it by myself for 40%:

iRYO400

upd

iRYO400

upd
ver.1

blood ver.1

ver.2

blood ver.2


anyone, please comment it

marul

Interesting concept, I suggest either finding a partner who can do the texturing or looking up at texturing tutorials yourself.

Good luck with the contest!

jett12

You need to re-visit basic modeling before you start having your way with it in Zbrush, your geometry and surfaces are all very faceted and "lumpy", they need more refinement. There are plenty of tutorials out there, even on Polycount!

Good Luck!

iRYO400

hey guys, upds are paused for some time because ive troubles with internet.
but i dont pause my wip(now working above head(ive stopped on ver1) and looking for partners):-D
please comment it

Tamarin

*edit

I'll try to give some helpful criticism.

You need to contrast busy areas with some bigger open areas. Think of it like when you are laying out text on a page. If you have busy text areas you need white space between them for the text to read properly. Keep the same design, but go at it with the "less is more" objective.

iRYO400

upd:

this is low poly edition
when my pc will work greatly i will show you my weapon with working masks.
Helmet:




helmet, it's trophy in battle vs somebody(Trololo )

critism are welcome, seriously welcome

kageko

hey, good to see more people working on pa biggest problem im seeing is you have alot of big shapes, and small detail, some secondary shapes (not details )would help your design stand out a bit more, theres a tutorial about that somewhere, i just cant find it atm

Other than that, i like your concept, its hard to make pa look different, considering you dont have a lot of freedom with her specs, but youre doing a good job at it, loving the visor

iRYO400

helmet is ready for 60%


what do you think about shoulders?

iRYO400

hello all!
helmet is ready.
painted high-res:

lancemaker

it sems like you can draw, why are you vertex painting ? Its harder to define painting on a vertex sculpting program. Try to extract Ao and pait on photoshop or a similar program.

iRYO400

why are
you vertex painting ?
when i do retopology and bake normal map, i also baking raw color map. its possible in topogun.

iRYO400

yeah!
upd:
shoulders without small details



p.s. i still have no internet on the pc, and can't check up and test my masks :-(

iRYO400

i haven't stoped my project, its still in process. cant upload pics :-C

iRYO400

painted shoulders

iRYO400

helmets colors updated

iRYO400

cape

iRYO400

p.s. i've some troubles with bones
http://imgur.com/ZGzw2

iRYO400

ta-da!

iRYO400

upd cape: