New to poly-count, looking for feedback on my 3d characters.

Faltzer

Hello everyone! I am a student artist looking to improve my work.

I've been interested in character modeling for quite some time now and I am looking forward to hear everyone critics on my work.

I am also want to know if my current models can be considered low poly because I am planning to sell some of the at turbo-squid ( Yes, even though I am a student I own the commercial version of maya 2013 lucky me .) and hopefully earn enough to afford Mudbox and photoshop.

So tell me what you guys think of the few examples I have attack below.

Donavonyoung

This would be better in pimping and previews.

D4V1DC

Donavonyoung wrote: »

This would be better in pimping and previews.

Someone move it?:poly142: Forums been a mess lately with the new folks i guess.

Faltzer

Yes, sorry I did not know there was a specific section for my post.

R3D

Looks really good so far, nothing to complain about the topology.

Also to post embedded images,

[img]URL to your uploaded image here[/img]

Faltzer

Ryswick wrote: »

Looks really good so far, nothing to complain about the topology.



Thanks, I been doing my best to keep almost all the areas in the male and female bodies as quads.

Here is a closer look on how I lay out the topology for a head. Please tell me if I am doing something wrong or if it's ok for animation purposes.


Doesn't that code require the image to be uploaded somewhere else instead of attaching it directly to a post?

D4V1DC

Looks great!
I was going to say with all the wire frames going on we can't make out the faces/heads. You've beaten me to the punch, render them images a big as you can don't be shy, muhaha!

You got a lot going on, you working on all of those at once?

R3D

Faltzer wrote: »

Ryswick wrote: »

Looks really good so far, nothing to complain about the topology.

Thanks, I been doing my best to keep almost all the areas in the male and female bodies as quads.

Here is a closer look on how I lay out the topology for a head. Please tell me if I am doing something wrong or if it's ok for animation purposes.


Doesn't that code require the image to be uploaded somewhere else instead of attaching it directly to a post?

Yeah, you can typically upload it to a site like http://www.imgur.com or something, makes it a bit easier to immediately see the image, but its not a big deal.

Faltzer

$!nz wrote: »

Looks great!
I was going to say with all the wire frames going on we can't make out the faces/heads. You've beaten me to the punch, render them images a big as you can don't be shy, muhaha!

You got a lot going on, you working on all of those at once?

Yes, I have 9 that I am currently working on right now which I am planing on selling on turbo-squid so I can buy mudbox and photoshop later down the road.

Which is the reason why I uploaded a few examples here to find out if they were good enough or not and to get feedback on how to improve them.

Darkendxelo

I'm not a pro at characters myself, but from what I can see maybe you should look into some more anatomy and use them as references. So far though the topology is looking good, and with the close ups post more angles of the face/ head so people can judge your work better.

Hopefully this is helpful and you get much more help fromthis site ;p

Faltzer

Darkendxelo wrote: »

I'm not a pro at characters myself, but from what I can see maybe you should look into some more anatomy and use them as references. So far though the topology is looking good, and with the close ups post more angles of the face/ head so people can judge your work better.

Hopefully this is helpful and you get much more help fromthis site ;p

I will, I just need to get the rest of my other models to the point were I can show them all together and then get feedback on what I need to improve.