Hey there, I really dig the treatment of the cloth.
Just two crits,
1. I feel like the silhouette is a bit weak.
There is very little change in outline of this character and I think it really could benefit by breaking it up more with peaks and valleys.
2. the burned flesh texture on the face is cool, but it's so even in size and detail that it's coming off as noise right now. I would pick some areas to go strong with it and find areas to lay off the detail.
Cheers.
-Neil
Hey. Yeah, I agree about the silhouette, will try and make it more interesting. As for the skin, I've updated the head a little bit, so it's not so crowded now.
Also, why is it a new thread and not just a reply in my original one?
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Just two crits,
1. I feel like the silhouette is a bit weak.
There is very little change in outline of this character and I think it really could benefit by breaking it up more with peaks and valleys.
2. the burned flesh texture on the face is cool, but it's so even in size and detail that it's coming off as noise right now. I would pick some areas to go strong with it and find areas to lay off the detail.
Cheers.
-Neil
Also, why is it a new thread and not just a reply in my original one?