I felt like making some low-poly game models over the last week or so. I Haven't made any game stuff for a bit so it was fun to get back into and thought I'd share them here.
Great work! Might wanna reduce the contrast in the feathers a bit. Was a bit hard for me to read what they where from the start. Maybe a bit of colour correction wouldn't hurt as well, to unify things a bit.
Looks great! I agree about the contrast on the feathers. I also think painting in some shadows/holes where those rings are going into the blade would really help. Right now they are just sort of shoved in there. I feel like maybe the contrast on the sword could have been pushed a little further as well. Really a big fan of these, especially the scythe!
really awesome work man! I think the dents you have all over the sythe are too even distributed across the metal. Borderline looking like cow spots. :P
hmm now you mention it I keep seeing cow spots (either that or subliminal imagery from Jessica's avatar :P) I'll try changing the variation up a bit thanks!
I've made some changes based on your feedback, I've dropped the contrast on the feathers and made the metal fatigue a bit more irregular. I definitely think it improved it, thanks for the feedback!
looks really nice, well done. Id add the same stepping designs to the bottom gold piece that are on the top ones that clamp onto the blade, but thats a minor suggestion
Thanks! Yeah I did think about that but was concerned I might be adding too much small detail on such a small asset, I might try it out and see how it looks though!
Ok, so I painted some brass holes around the ring bases and put together a new image with the updated map from all your feedbacks. Thanks again guys n gals
Thanks guys, yeah you're right Blaisoid the edging between those two materials could use a little more occlusion/contrast to separate them out - I'll add it tonight.
You could pretty much call those weapons done. There's always something to improve but it'll be much better for you if you cranked out some new ones and repeat the process, perhaps even make a full character or environment?
Thanks AimBiZ - Yeah Im gonna leave i there for those now, Im currently working on a small environment piece I'll post up some WiPs soon when I get more done.
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@AimBiZ , good call I'll have a play with them tonight, thx!
@sybrix, I have got some painted shadow/occlusion on the base of the rings at the moment, but its real subtle, I'll try bumping it up a bit tonight.
Great work though man!
maybe more softness on the feathers
other than that it looks very good.