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Portfolio - OBrien3D

Hey everyone. Just got my portfolio together and I am look for some C&C. All responses are appreciated.

http://www.obrien3d.net/

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  • bcottage
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    bcottage polycounter lvl 13
    Your website is very clear, no problems at all with the layout.

    My only crit is the diffuse texture of your ak47..it looks like you have rushed it a bit.
  • fearian
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    fearian greentooth
    Hey man, I agree about the AK - the textures are looking very flat and dull atm. You need to spend some quality time with Racer445 and his excellent tutorials. He tends to focus on weapon modelling and metal texturing and really knows his stuff. Give his name a google and check out this link to get you started: http://www.nextgenhardsurface.com/index.php?pageid=racer445

    Also for the AK, use crazybump, NDO, or even the xnormal photoshop plugins to make some texture based normal maps. You could do with adding some wood grain on the stock, and some metal details for screws and ridges. Don't go too overboard with this!

    The french building is good and the scale is really great. For the most part your textures are okay, but you are missing some colour variation to break things up a bit.

    Good luck, Iron out these problems and you'll have a solid folio.
  • DudeinCA
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    Hmm. Ok. I know what your talking about. I'll work on my AK's texture some more. Then I'll get back to my french building. Thanks a lot
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