Blacksmith_walking forge

mccartm6

I'm working on this guy at the moment he is a blacksmithwith a twist. AS a creature he has evolved over time to actually hav an internal forge which he can use to heat metals. Heat is ejected from the pores on his back. Still very much WIP and i want to push my abilities on this guy so suggestions and input would be great. Thanks

ps. and yes he will be gettting a big hammer

gilesruscoe

Cool concept/idea. Here's a few notes on what you've got so far.

Really like that back vents and the skin around there, i think a bit more of this treatment in other places would look nice too.

mccartm6

haha trying to school me on anatomy Giles, wait till i get my hands on you lol.
Thanks for the crits though, the straps are a mess as you rightly pointed out so i need to work on them. i'll tone down the cloth a bit too. his arms look ok to me, i'll play around with the length and see what happens!
good spot on the delts silhouette, i'll fix that.

I have;nt detailed his skin or really anything yet, so alot to go on there. I'm not happy with the clasp/latch thing on the back apron strap either need to redesign that.

Really wnat to push this guy so i can finally start putting a portfolio together. So many little things wrong with him though its annoying!

funkbro

I dig this concept tons Mert, just out of curiosity where do the metals go and where do they come out?
Metal Poop?

mccartm6

thanks mate no metal poop unfortunatly, his back is just the furnace to heat up metal.

mccartm6

Spent the afternoon detailing his body and fixing a few of the crits. C&C welcome

mccartm6

ok so i've have reworked his hands completely. Need to work on his face and head mostly now, and then the body should be close to finished. going oto move on and build his main hammer know so i have all the parts assembled. Crits and comments very welcome thanks

almighty_gir

Giles was absolutely spot on with his anatomy crits. you NEED to revisit the shoulders and arms, they're holding back what could be an awesome piece.

mccartm6

thanks for the feedback, right gona go fix his arms and shoulders now then. Motivation is a go!

chrisradsby

Yeah something feels a bit off, the bigger shapes of the hands, arms and shoulders. Maybe just go down a couple of subdivs and mess around and try stuff. Good work so far though!

almighty_gir

the other thing i'd suggest is looking at elephant legs and the muscles they have. particularly in the foot/below the knee.

mccartm6

Ok so i have reworked the arms and legs and shoulder. Any better? hopefully im going in the right direction. Thanks again for all the feedback its really helpful thanks!



edit:

Fixed the back of the shoulders.(i think) :-)

mccartm6

Finally got around to finishing this guy over Christmas. Great bit of knowledge gleaned from working on him. Ton of things i'd like to change fix etc. But i'll take what i've learned and move on to something new.