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[UDK] Chicago Street Building

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  • aajohnny
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    aajohnny polycounter lvl 13
    Thanks, they were a mixture of re-used assets and just other modular building pieces I made just for the background.
  • Pookhan
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    Pookhan polycounter lvl 13
    cool. I'll try do something similar. Thanks!
  • Pookhan
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    Pookhan polycounter lvl 13
    Messed around with the building at the back and added some road repairs, cracks and drains. Also tried out some buildings in the background.

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  • Stromberg90
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    Stromberg90 polycounter lvl 11
    Since I am going to play football(soccer) now I can't go to into depth.
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    But I made this rough paintover for you, one of the main problems I think is that you don't have a piece in there to draw my attention, the building looks nice, but right now it's surrounded by the same type of building so it does not really stand out, so the thing to focus on would be get some interest to that center building.
    I also think it's to dark and brown, misses some cold lights in there.

    Another thing that I think is common is that these types of scenes can get very empty, like now you mostly a open space at the left that I think looks a bit out of place.

    I also liked the shots you had with the sun better, maybe try a few different light setups and see if you can get any ideas, night scenes are hard to get right.

    Nice job on all the assets and textures, nothing wrong there :)
    maybe the car is a bit simple ;)
  • Pookhan
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    Pookhan polycounter lvl 13
    Hey Stromberg90 , soccer is football here too :). Thanks for your advice and paint overs. any ideas what I could add to the centre building?
  • Stromberg90
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    Stromberg90 polycounter lvl 11
    Football is the way it should be ;)
    About the building, I am sorry I don't have anything specific that could work, maybe try and give it a more unique feel, difference it from the rest.
  • danpaz3d
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    danpaz3d polycounter lvl 7
    Pookhan wrote: »
    Any ideas what I could add to the centre building?

    Don't have to do too much. I'd probably add antenna/s on the top and making the brick colour different. Hue/brightness variation.
    Id probably make the brick colour lighter.
    OR you could make all the other buildings darker.
  • KassEscoe
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    the scene looks awesome! great job
  • LANKUS MAXIMUS
    Wow I remember liking this scene over 2 years ago...

    KassEscoe - How the hell did you find it? :)
  • Pookhan
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    @KassEscoe
    @LANKUS MAXIMUS

    Thanks a lot for the compliments. I wrapped this up around 2 years ago, so you must have been deep in the archives to have found this haha. I should really do something similar because I'm sure I can do a better job of it now than I did back then.
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