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[WIP] FNH M240 Bravo

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Hi there, new polycounter here! I have been working on this for quite some time now, and decided it was time to show it to the public. Hopefully you all can help me spot some imperfections and inaccuracies as I am certain it's not at it's fullest potential!:)


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Any crits would be most appreciated! I still have a lot to do on this one.

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  • Frostbite-
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    Hi there again, just a little update. I've been busy working on replacing all of the floaters on the mesh(mainly the receiver), and add all of the holes. It's definitely a good bit of work. :) I've also been working on fattening my edges out so they aren't so tight, as well as doing some work on the muzzle break, and the pieces to the gas regulator.

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  • Frostbite-
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    Hi there, me again!(Assuming there may be someone interested in this thread) Just wanted to post an update on the 240. Started working on the bipods, and changed up the grip some.

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    And also decided to throw in a shot of the wire frame. It's a bit messy.

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  • jackalope
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    jackalope polycounter lvl 11
    Go back and check references of the handle and trigger guard area, im pretty sure yours is too wide and blocky
  • Hang10
    Although it looks correct, looking at it the grip seems a little small compared to the size of the trigger guard.

    Also I believe the perforated hand guard on top of the barrel has much smoother edges and it's so angular.
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    @jackalope
    I am so glad you pointed this out as I was supposed to fix this, but I must've forgotten about it. In any case, how does this look?

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    @Hang
    How does this look for the hand guard?

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  • Hang10
    I'll be honest you may not have changed it much, but looking at references myself this time it looks good now. Keep going :)
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    Hang10 wrote: »
    I'll be honest you may not have changed it much, but looking at references myself this time it looks good now. Keep going :)

    Thanks dude, will do! :thumbup: I am pretty much certain that I am going to have to work on the edges some more here, they still look rather sharp.. Especially, in the renders.
  • Frostbite-
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    Frostbite- polycounter lvl 7
    Hi there! Frosty here with a small update on the M240. First off, I finally managed to replace ALL of the floating geometry on the receiver. Not sure if there is even a point in me posting a pic, as you may not notice the difference, but oh well.. Gonna put it up anyways! :)

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    Second up, I had to re-do the feed cover due to it being extremely messy.. There isn't any real difference in terms of what you'll see in the renders, but it is definitely easier for me to work with now

    I've also put some more work into the gas regulator knob, it's nothing major, but I've never really done anything like this before. :)

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