CARGOrilla !!

Vitrux

Hello Guys! I just finished a low poly version of my character CARGOrilla.
I would like to know what do you guys think about it? :)

I should credit.
Original Concept Art by Rune Holst M

Rav3

Vitrux - Look nice! It will be great if you post some screens with him standing on rear legs I guess As a critique I cant understand what material he use as base (I mean white one) lack of shines maybe and those red lights, in my opinion they should be blue or teal, red doesn't look good here

konstruct

all those innards are amazing! although I wish more polys were spent smoothing out his outer shell components.

Vitrux

Rav3 - Thanks mate, well, he is made of some strain opaque material:poly122: if you are interested, I invite you to visit my website so you can see the high res version, maybe you can understand him better:\. And for the ligths yes could be, just in the concepr they were orange!

konstruct - Thanks mate, yes I know, I just was in the dilemma of saving polygons!

Stinger88

Nice model.

Crit: The metal plates on shoulders and arms (The white bits) look more like stone imo. Needs more bare metal at the edges and where damage has occurred.

EDIT: it is meant to be metal right?...either way its looking like stone.

Also agree with Konstruct. You've put a lot of polys on the interior which makes it look great but you should have put more in the silhouette.

Lost-Artist89

oh wows, loving every bit of this... very nice

nick2730

I agree with stinger awesome model, i hope the arms are stone cause thats what it looks like for sure

Paul Pepera

I too agree with konstruct's feedback. More geometry should have been spent on the large silhouette critical forms at the expense of the detailed parts on the inside.

As a partial side note the design initially reminded me of Kow Yokoyama's mecha gorilla design.

D4V1DC

That's pretty awesome, I can see him with a partner for some reason.

If I had to critic I'd say maybe adding another color somewhere to mix It up would be nice.

jordan.kocon

TLDR: The material doesn't read like metal at all, it looks like concrete. Can you post the spec map?

Vitrux

Hello guys! Thanks a lot for all of your nice feedback!! :)

To all of you that said the pieces look like concrete or stone,! you are completely right!! They aren't actually metal! they are something like opaque sci-fi concrete... strange material:poly124:!

I have also got some critiques about the very low poly count in the big pieces, so I fixed that!!

And here is the final model!!!!

HOPE YOU LIKE IT !!! :poly121::\

bunda4th

Looks really cool but I would make those joints/pistons/and inner parts metal, if they are metal it looks a bit more stone like to me.

Vitrux

Thanks for you crits and comments guys!

konstruct

YES!!! SO much better.

Vitrux

YES!! THANKS MATEE!!!! :) Much appreciated!!

Stoop_Kid

Oh wow, this is beautiful. Directly to the inspiration folder with you!

Snader

I saw it, and thought "this would make a good friend for D0g". And then I saw the teensy Aperture logos.

I feel you have some slight priority issues - very complex internals and details yet blocky bits in the silhouette such as the arm wires and shoulder pads - but overall the things looks good.

Vitrux

Stoop_Kid - Thanks a lot mate, glad you like it!

Snader - Yes, it was inspired in the Portal Universe!! He has the cube in the high res version:) Well yes! the wires were limited of polygons:(, thanks for your observation.

Vitrux

Thanks for your comments guys!

latorril

I love this! Beautiful all-around!

Vitrux

thanks Latorril !!!you can check the high poly mesh and the real time mesh 3d

visualization here http://www.vitrux3d.com/cargorilla_01.html

Vizjerie

oh this is wonderful.

Vitrux

thanks a lot Vizjerie

InvertedVantage

So badass it hurts.

Vitrux

thank you InvertedVantage we will post some more game models soon :poly121::poly122: