[Mixamo Contest] "Little" Knight

FerryMarsel

Hello guys, this is my first post here, i am Indonesian, i'm 15 years old .. and i try to make a knight for mixamo character contest..
so, i hope you like it..:poly121:

3shold

Hey dude.

The link to the picture is broken. Might need to re-upload.

FerryMarsel

link fixed dude..

nandonandito

wow.. cool, but head look pretty small, i think..

FerryMarsel

@nandonandito, thanks for your reply dude, i agree about the head, i still working on it.. hope i can fix it later..

nandonandito

okok, good job..

Di$array

Yeah as nandonandito pointed out the head is a tad too small as it is now. Maybe a nice plume would create an interesting helmet as its a bit basic at the moment. If you decide to use the plume suggestion I would maybe angle the sholuder pads so it creates a nice line for the reader to read.

Also I think you are going to need some large boots on this character to help the silhouette, as he's reading too top heavy at the moment. As for the groin area I would move the leg plates down so it gives him some range of movement.

Any ideas for the gauntlets?

FerryMarsel

thank you for your advice Di$array, about the plume, i will think to use that, i think i won't angle the shoulder pads because i will make another pads, just under the larger pads.. yes, i agree about the boots, i'll make it larger.. maybe i'll post some updates tomorrow, so stay tune..

mixamo

The image link isn't work for me for some reason.

FerryMarsel

mixamo : really? i will fix it later.. thanks for remind it..

FerryMarsel

here is some updates and changes, hope this link is working.. critiques and comments are very appreciated.. thank you..

FerryMarsel

still have no ideas about the gauntlets and the shoes,. and the middle of the image is the basic shape of the shield.. sorry for the slow progress, im pretty busy this month.. but, i will finish this knight As soon as possible..