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Christian Bale Character -- Constructive Criticism

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  • manilamerc
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    manilamerc polycounter lvl 6
    Thanks AlphaMeow but this is my latest sculpt. The one you wrote on was an older version. Hopefully you could touch up on this one instead

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  • AlphaMeow
    Still has the same problems as the one above,
    1) he has a very pronounced nasal bone
    2) the nostrils should be pulled out slightly
    3) the crease that is the temporalis is poorly defined
    4) from the ide view i can see his zygomatic is melting down his face
    5) from the neck the strenoclidemastoid muscle is missing or seems to be going in the wrong direction.
    6) the corners of the lip look like they are too far forward compared to where his jowls should be
    7) the nasal-labial fold is absent in it's place are 2 strange lines?
    8 ) jaw line poorly defined it looks unrealistic, it looks like his skin is just hanging off his face rather than following the contours of his underlying muscularture
    9) the hairline around the side burns is inacurate
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