Super Shorty [Shotgun-WIP]

igi

Hi,after watching this awesome tutorial by Millenia I decided to make some weaponry stuff(at least trying on it).

I chose Serbu super shorty as case subject and here is my progress;

HI POLY

LOW POLY (3200 TRI)

TEXTURING(IN PROGRESS)


I especially need critiques on where I'm currently standing,which is texturing progress.Need to make it look awesome,Thanks!.

igi

Did some changes on the texture,still not confident with appearance of metal texture.

dpadam450

http://www.airsoftgunslinger.com/images/P788B-Airsoft-Black-Pistol-Grip-Spring-Shotgun.gif

Think you should add a grip onto the handle.

Tim270

Imo the spec is too noisy right now, you could tone down quite a lot of the grunge to get much nicer highlights. The grip could be pushed harder in the normal and spec to make it pop more.
i.e
http://media.giantbomb.com/uploads/9/94043/1409210-870no1l.jpg

I dont want to sound like a asshole but it seems a bit early for crits, just push it further and we can give better feed back as it mostly looks like base materials right now.

Modeling wise it looks solid mate.

igi

Hello again.Another update.I'm calling it Done,or almost done maybe? Thanks!

igi

Low-Poly and Flats.Need critiques!


Thanks.

yodude87

awesome work igi. congrats

Millenia

Hey that's pretty cool, the damage looks a bit random in some places (and the UVs could be optimized some), but looks like it baked real nicely.

igi

@youdude87, thanks again man

@millenia, really appreciated your post.You're my hero :P.I agree it's somewhat randomly detailed at some points and yeah uv'ing could be tighter.But well,that was a good learning experience.And glad you liked the bake
edit: omg,just realized you have a super shorty in your portfolio.I wish I would have seen this before! Some real cool details you got.Next time I should search peoples work well.