WIP Female Character Modern

parodice29

Hi all

I have been working on this character for a few days not finished blocking all her accessories but the base is there! I need to go over the trouser sculpt and the her body needs more work! any ideas or crit would be welcome!

sofabound

Aw, man, I LOVE the shoes. Looks like you spent a lot of time on that already!

Good job overall; I think though from this angle, the bicep on her right arm makes that arm look a bit anorexic. The left looks fine so maybe just fleshing out that part of the right is all that needs to be done.

I'm not particularly crazy about the line in the center of her jumpsuit- if you're planing on putting in a belt or something, with that heavy of a crease it seems that there should be more of an overlap for the top part of the jumpsuit. You've probably already got some ref images, but this is kind of what I'm talking about, if this is anywhere near the look you're going for:

http://hannesfashionblog.com/!BVKJ1G!!Wk~$(KGrHgoOKjsEjlLmVqugBKRCVrhdGg~~_1.JPG
http://hannesfashionblog.com/hal1.png
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_B6J6nGs6VwA/SKW8n5HtJhI/AAAAAAAAFE8/-vkLplFZ8xI/s1600-h/Karen+Millen+satin+jumpsuit+asoscom.jpg

Otherwise, the jumpsuit ends up looking fairly heavy- like the pants part is dragging it down.
Fantastic progress so far, can't wait to see how this turns out.

parodice29

Cheers for that I am still working on it so I am guessing it will change a lot i will defo chunk up her arms, the jump suit seam looks a bit lumpy i will remake and show you when I am finished I will also add a belt. thanks yeah I spent some time on the shoes, ill post agazin tonight with my progress!!

thanks for the ref ill take a look!

Tits

Promising!! Really like it so far, going to keep an eye on the thread for sure!

parodice29

Made a few updates not had any time since i'm moving house but i created the belts, sculpted in some more creases and fixed the bangles!

I am having trouble with the wrist not sure why they seem fine from some angles others they look too thin!

but it will be finished by next week but got no internet in new house !!!!!!!!!!! lord help me!

parodice29

I have not had the internet for a while so I have been stuck with textures and other such things but it is coming on and I now need to get it done and start a new project!!!

I have the hair to finish and to sort the render any feed back would be greatly appreciated

danpaz3d

Nice! Texture looks good. Only crit is I think the eyes are a bit off. Not sure if it's just the low res or render but they seem 'flat'. Otherwise it looks good!

parodice29

I have gotten to an okay stage. yet I feel to much is wrong with the character, I am going to leave this character here and start something new. I Feel my sculpt and lo poly needed a bit more depth to them!

the spec is hardly showing poor renders

the buckles and leather on the belt I was happy with I felt it came out well(picture does not show this it looks rubbish on here)

If any one has any crit would be grateful especially about anatomy and texturing!

Thanks for viewing