Seqioua forest WIP

Ryan Newitt

This is from a project I was working on at school. I plan on polishing it up and would love some feed back, don't pull any punches. Thanks!

Ryan Newitt

Bump for love.

Noors

well the models are decent. Your lighting is totally not enhancing them i'm affraid. Weird shadows.. Black sky ?
Needs some shader love : normal maps, etc...

Darkleopard

Is this in UDK? If so, add a skydome. Will instantly make the scene nicer. That or people may just assume its the end of 2012 and the world is coming to an end . I would crit some more things but i have to go to work now.

Good start!

Ryan Newitt

Yeah, no skydome atm. The trees have a normal map but I'm not sure the lightmaps came through. They aren't showing up in the UV channel, but I'm not getting the no lightmap error message. I also have no idea why the shadows are so wonky.

Thanks for the feedback, I'll post some updates soon.

praetor187

Its starting to get there, I would say right now the trees look like theyve just been stuck into the scene, they dont give me much of an impression that they've really been growing there. Thats the biggest thing that sticks out to me that can really help the scene along. Hope that helps.