Dylan and LRoys Chickfight

Dylan Brady · May 2012

Me n Mike decided to post our ladies up for public humiliation in the name of good clean fun! now lets have a fair fight, no hair pull- ohh screw it just go!

Lineage II female Mage in Dark Crystal Robes:
REFFSHEET
http://dylan-brady.com/publicimages/lineageIIMagereffsheet.jpg

Front Ortho sketch:

Progress:

LRoy · May 2012

doing ken from zone of the enders 2. long way to go to not look terrible. gonna try to do as much as i can before the bootcamp.

blocking everything out. if anyone has any crit i'd really appreciate it.

Tits · May 2012

Really nice starr! I think it looks realy nice, tho at first i did really understood and tough she was naked on the crotch area!
when you will finish blocking I think you should fix that

(but of course with texture it would had been different)

disanski · May 2012

Awesome start guys.
Dylan very nice concept. I think the forearm is either too long or the biceps area is too short but from the shots you posted I can't be sure.
LRoy those are awesome proportions

only think I think needs some attention is the Hands- perhaps they are a bit too small

Funky Bunnies · May 2012

strong start you guys! this should be awesome

daphz · May 2012

cool stuff guys! Dylan I'd thicken up her arms and legs a bit

and Lroy nice star man, her hands are lookin a bit small though

Dylan Brady · May 2012

thanks a bunch Tits Dis and Denis, And TTANKS for the badass paintover Chris:
Pimpage: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/21024888/sharestuff/dylan_womanatomy.gif

Deffinately have to thicken up the arms more forsure like you said Deny but I, done for today so ill post the progress.

Steve Schulze · May 2012

Looks like you've lost some of the voluptuous form that made the concept interesting, Dylan. You need to make the forms a bit more extreme all round.

Dylan Brady · Jul 2012

this had been but mostly on the backburner, but Ive been coming back to it every once in a while and tweaking stuff.
dropped the clothing for now to work on the anatomy

JR · Jul 2012

She's looking really hot by now.

disanski · Jul 2012

Hey nice work guys.
Dylan that looks awesome so far man. there are few things i noticed and it could be all just in my head and I am also still learning too so don't take it too serious :
- the ribcage does not look very accurate to me. It looks too wide at its bottom for me. I try to draw on top of your image - green is what you have and red is what i was thinking of - so kind of just bring it in a bit forwards the center of the abs. That sticking out part should be just at the border with the abs usually.
- the angle of the scapula coming down her back looks a bit too extreme so with red is what i think it should be.
- space between the Posterior Superior Iliac Spine and the gluteal fold is a little too much but it looks like you are doing this on purpose and it probably does look better that way, I just wanted to point it out.

I think that is about it. Keep it up guys.

Dylan Brady · Jul 2012

Thanks a bunch Dis, i missed your post until now but im gonna deffinately hit those changes up. good points.
mostly all Hard-Surface clothes

Dylan and LRoys Chickfight

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