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2D Wipeout Car, Typo & Can

Shrike
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Hello Guys

Student from Germany here, from the Gamesacademy, im first
semester right now , and i would really like some feedback from
you guys with more experience :)


I did those 3 in the last, personal tho, not for any project


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The Water is made with displacement maps, and many passes I combined
with layer masks in PS

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Both renderings are made in C4D

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I wanted to go for a punk-ish theme for the car, the team could have a name like "Bandits" or something
along these lines, I plan to add a corporate logo later. Made all in Photoshop.


I would really appreciate crits on those, especially the anti grav racer
which is inspired by wipeout, I dont really know what to do with the
background..

Greetings

Eric
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  • Shrike
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    Shrike interpolator
    No one willing to give some crits to a student ? Come on guys
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  • rexus
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    rexus polycounter lvl 16
    hey i like the renders something like that gears it self more to motion graphics you should animate/ lens flares are very frowned upon and cliche / and looking at the composition of the soda can tone down the background the focal point should be the the product you are selling the Photoshop concept is a bit dark considering that the light source appears to be coming from straight down noon light source
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