Female Character

Inkfish · Nov 2011

Beginnings of a new realtime character. I finished recently the basemeshes for the high poly, mostly sdiv so far. I started to sculpt the character now and would love some feedback on the model so far.
My aim is to make her a next gen spec. character and try to rig and make some basic animations.

Mesh blockouts, mostly sdiv sofar, hands look horrible now, but i'll work on them

Started Sculpting, still heavily wip.

closeup of the head

MainManiac · Nov 2011

Perfect start so far.

No crits other than her shoulders look slightly too far out and a tad bit too broad.

Inkfish · Nov 2011

Thanks Frell! good call on the shoulders, i transposed them from a stiff t-pose and i guess the triceps were left behind a bit.

a bit more sculpting, mainly on the head.

Inkfish · Nov 2011

Finished the Sculpt and started to do the lp and unwrap, so far body is done, accessories and clothes are next.(please excuse the artifacts on the armpits)

LRoy · Nov 2011

Looking nice man. Bake looks good. The head position looks a bit off. Almost like she's tucking her chin in.

Are you doing the hair?

dannedadon · Nov 2011

looking cool but theres something funky under the armpit? looks like shading problems

Dimfist · Nov 2011

at first glance what I see is the knees are too low or her calf section isn't long enough. I may be wrong as it could be the folds throwing me off.
Under the armpit it looks like the normals are off. Could be a smoothing group issue, or maybe you need to retriangulate. Not sure without looking at the Normal map itself.

ObbieSkinner · Nov 2011

I think her tits are a little far apart.

Inkfish · Nov 2011

Thanks for the fedback guys, i'll post comments tomorrow, too tired now. still heavily wip, having major trouble with the hair cards, and transparency.

mutatedjellyfish · Nov 2011

She looks a bit dumpy, if that's what you're going for. Legs could stand to be longer, hips could stand to be wider.

Breasts seem inflated, as if she's had implants.

LRoy · Nov 2011

Did you change the proportions of her face? Or is the perspective jacked way up?

Inkfish · Nov 2011

mutatedjellyfish: thanks for the feedback, the red model had a bit cheapish impant job done that i followed (kinda foolish) loking back i prob. should have picked a different bodytype.

Lroy: no, i think i really messed up with the fov and camera angle, here's a current wip with internal rendered

Inkfish · Nov 2011

Alex3d · Nov 2011

Hey, good job on skin texture! I think her thighs are too long, her knees should be higher. Adding a bit of fine detail normal map to clothing would be a nice thing to see. And just for vanity sake a little makeup couldn't hurt :P It might not be much, but it will make your character more welcoming.

Female Character

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