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Navdeep · Jan 2011

Hey guys,

This is my first post on this site i wanna know what you guys think,
its not done yet its just a high poly that im wokring on let me know what im doing good and what im doing wrong

Emil Mujanovic · Jan 2011

The image you linked is broken. I checked and you're using ImageShack, it's really annoying to link with ImageShack if you use the wrong links.

Here's the link for everyone else:
http://img809.imageshack.us/i/16722910150388940230578.jpg/

MatthewS · Jan 2011

It looks like you are doing alright so far. The concept sheet you have looks interesting, where did you find it?

Navdeep · Jan 2011

I got it from cg hub i can post the full concept later today so u can take a look at it

Navdeep · Jan 2011

Navdeep · Jan 2011

Here is an better shot of the building

Shogun3d · Jan 2011

Building is a bit top heavy and scale is too wide, check your windows as references and make sure you try to keep accurate proportions. For example the base support pillars almost look about the same size as your windows up top, and the distance between each balcony looks only about a window and a half tall.

The average window size in a home is about 3' by 5' so you can use that as a general rule and just adjust from there to accommodate style.

Keep it up, off to a great start with an interesting concept!

Also, I recommend rendering on anything but a black background. Try rendering on a dark background such as 60,60,60

Bal · Jan 2011

You should link the original artist, http://gray-shuko.cghub.com/ (cool artist, worked with him for a year or so).

Bit early to criticise for now, but yeah as kaburan said the proportions are a bit strange, keep at it, and welcome to Polycount!

Navdeep · Jan 2011

Thanks for the feed back guys

I'm going to make the windows on the balcony a bit smaller so that should help with proportions.

Rendering the background out in a darker color makes it look a lot better thanks for that tip.

I'm going to upload a few more pictures by the end of the day a side front and Preceptive

Thanks a lot for the feed back

Mark Dygert · Jan 2011

Bal wrote: »

You should link the original artist, http://gray-shuko.cghub.com/ (cool artist, worked with him for a year or so).

OOOOAAAHHH cool stuff! Yes please! I'll have some more! http://cghub.com/images/view/100721/

Other than that... its coming along, keep at it!

Bal · Jan 2011

Mark, you'd cry if you saw how poor the game most of those artworks are for ended up, such a waste of great designs.

GoSsS · Jan 2011

Haha Bal !! You're right but don't forget all the great moments of laughs when we were testing all the different sports

The bottom part of the building seems a little odd, can we have a closer look on this part because i don't think the entrance really fits in such a little height (the stairs look like they're going really high).
A last little thing, the top part (all the part above the blue block) can be scaled down.

Welcome to poco \o/ !!

Navdeep · Jan 2011

Here is a picture of the front i still have to add in the windows im working on that now

Heartless · Jan 2011

On the left side of the building, their is no open balcony area like the other side. The right side has that little area outside of the glass that allows plants/trees to grow, which is impossible on the other side since the building is blocking it.

GoSsS · Jan 2011

Just some critics :

As you can see, the gap I circled in red is smaller on the concept (even if you have not created the white part yet).

The zone in green needs to be wider.

You need to detach the two elements where the pink line is.

I think you can change the concept a bit on the blue zone. It's not really cool to have a balcony right in front of a wall

I was wrong about the entrance the proportions seem right

Navdeep · Jan 2011

I widened out the second building

luckly i made everything separate so all it took was moving the objects on top up

For the left side i think that I'm going to close it off so the windows are there but no real balcony

Thanks for the feed back making my work look a lot better

Navdeep · Jan 2011

Didn't add much from my last post but here is a side front and prospective of the building

Still trying to figure out what to do on the left side

Navdeep · Feb 2011

Hey guys,

Anymore feed back you guys can give me ?

Thanks

megalmn2000 · Feb 2011

Yeah, on the concept art, there's no "windows door" on the front side of the hotel!

Sorry for the word, I mean, the stuff that hide the sun from the windows.

Navdeep · Feb 2011

O yea your right thanks :P

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