A sexy time, lady thread.

DeadlyFreeze · Apr 2012

With Hazardous and crew getting ready to do their thing I got the bug to do my own female character too. I'm sure there will be a lot of good advice floating around so I'll try and capitalize on all that sweetness.

I don't have anything really planned out yet, kinda of just freeballing as I get the anatomy down. All I know for sure is I want some that will 'bring all the boys to the yard'.

Anatomy critiques and suggestions are most wanted, thanks.

Donavonyoung · Apr 2012

I would love to see a side shot. It looks like her shoulder blades are too flat again her body, but I can't really tell without a side shot. Also the rhythms of her legs are a bit off. It shouldn't come in like it does from the heel to the calf. So I would grab some ref and rework the anatomy.

ScudzAlmighty · Apr 2012

agree about the calf's/thighs, she's looking a little bow-legged right now which is pretty off putting. good start though.

teeth · Apr 2012

I think the main issue with the bowlegged-ness is the fact that her ankles bend unnaturally. They pop out to the front and out to the sides. It looks almost as though you wanted her to be pidgeon toed, but on heels and platforms of those size, her heel weight would probably be centered more under her body than to the outside.

Something else I also noticed is her rear. I would lift and separate her buttcheeks and add some sort of conformingness to her underwear (kinda like a wedgie but not quite).

Her torso is also a bit manly. I think this is as simple as lowering her waist a bit, and widening her hips. Maybe not the waist bit, but definitely the hips are too narrow compared to her shoulders.

Ace-Angel · Apr 2012

She looks like a hooker who has been only snorting cocaine for the past 3 days.

Kot_Leopold · Apr 2012

Use the Move tool and move her ass up a tad. That alone will make her more attractive.

DeadlyFreeze · Apr 2012

Thanks guys, I cured her rickets and fiddled with her ass some as suggested.

@ace, thanks man I'll take that as sage advice with what I'll assume is first hand experience with coked out hookers.

Ace-Angel · Apr 2012

Haha, yep, you can say that I'm a pimp on the weekends ;P

It looks much better right now, although I'm not sure how much you want to push muscle structure pending on your choices. Girls who wear high heels tend to have very muscular, thick legs, even a little bit of height really push's the muscle structure.

Something that long? I think her muscle definition would be thicker, harder, and stronger all the way up to her va-jay-jay. Something along the lines of Amazonian.