Amazonian Warrior

JarlanPerez

Hey guys,

It's been a while since I've been able to post anything. I've been slammed at work and with little to no free time -_-

This is a Rough WIP at the moment looking to get some opinions from you guys. I'm trying to get most of the anatomy work done before I add the light cloths.

I started doing a quick facial expression to get a feel for her persona a little. Any and all feedback would be amazing

JarlanPerez

lol Thanks for the feedback bro. I realized that weird transition in the but area before and I could have sworn I fixed it, Guess I forgot to save. O well not a hard fix at all.

Thx for the hand rigging tip. I was just going to pose it in zbrush for a still but then again you never know

Rockley Bonner

raise and pull back the cheek bones and her face sticks out too much.

LateWhiteRabbit

Super Happy Cow wrote: »

Feet too large, ears too high or the face is too small, shoulders too wide, legs too long(I think, not sure)

There's something wrong with the transition between the lower back and the butt area. "Tap dat" at your own discretion.
I feel like if you're going to rig it, you should flatten the hands along along an axis rather than having it be diagonal.

Ears are definitely too high. The bottom earlobe should be roughly in line with the bottom of the nose, and the top of the ear should line up with the eyebrow. This will vary slightly in individuals of course.

Flat hands and arms aren't good for rigging. They are easier to lay out bones for, sure, but it will be more difficult to get good animation once they are rigged if there is no bend for the IK solvers to infer a proper direction. The human hand is never flat unless it is pushed up against something. In other words, JarlanPerez, I would not flatten them along an axis.

Stinger88

The eyes are too high up and at too much of an angle. Bring them down away from the eyebrows and level them out. Ears are too high as people have already said and her Bum is a bit large on the side view as well.

Keep at it though. Its nearly there.

Steve Schulze

NM

JarlanPerez

Thanks a lot for all the great input everyone. I really appreciate it. I'll post up some progress shots with all the advise given.

Man the ears were really up there. I brought them down and was like "what was I thinking" lol

Stinger88

Heres a quick liquify of the crit I mentioned. I forgot to do it previously.

basically.

Cranium too high
Eyes lowered away from brows and leveled out
Move mouth and nose up a bit
ears down (as you know)
head narrowed a bit

Hope that helps.

JarlanPerez

You guys are awesome.

@Stinger Thanks alot bro. Great help

Here's a little bit of progress. I've been pretty short on time lately but managed to do some tweaks here and there. I roughed in a top. Still in progress. I also started on the blades that she's going to be wielding. Nothing to special now just a basic shape of them before I throw them in zbrush for some fun.

Endzeit

Isnt this the weapon Riddick uses? Oo
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh306/jbeasley7_2008/Weapons/TS-RIDDICK_540.jpg

ok it is