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Good Morning everyone, This is my first post ever in poly count fitting its in the new year eh?

Anyway

I'm working on a concept car a off-road Camaro.

Please let me know I may improve it, Thank you very much.


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  • Zack Fowler
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    Zack Fowler polycounter lvl 11
    Hey, nice! This totally makes me think of RPM Racing for SNES, which I loved. The car design itself seems pretty cool, but it's a bit hard to make out because your lighting is pretty ambient and flat, and the car is black. Keeping the car black is fine but you'll want to push your lighting to have more directionality and contrast so that the surfaces (and surrounding environment) are easier to read.
  • NomadSoul2501
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    NomadSoul2501 polycounter lvl 10
    Hey man, welcome!

    Looking nice, I do agree though that the lighting now is too ambient.
    Try to not make it mid-day while still casting light and shadows to make it more dynamic.
    You could try throwing it into the cry engine and trying out different times of day there to get an idea what you want to achieve and then recreating that in MR.

    Also, if you post up wires, UV tiles and textures you can get a lot of direction.

    Keep at it!

    Cheers!
  • Cglewis
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    Cglewis polycounter lvl 12
    I messed with the lighting a bit
    I think its looking better
    let me know what you think thanks.

    camaro9.jpg
    camaro9b.jpg
  • Megadeth
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    Too shiny. Less reflection would probably be more realistic. (See the pic below.) The model looks nice though! Tires look flat, maybe sit them on top of the sand more.

    Cadillac_STS_2000_Black_Superstition_Mountains_Desert_082306PICT0735.jpg
  • gsokol
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    +1 for less reflection. Also, I wouldn't expect to see such a beastly off road vehicle be shiny like that...well except for the lifted pimped out grocery getter heavy duty trucks I see all too often haha.

    Seriously though...some mud and dirt would help.
  • Builder_Anthony
    Superstition mountains in background?
  • Cglewis
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    Cglewis polycounter lvl 12
    im working on dusting it up, and trying to get the reflections right
    "superstition moutains in the background?"- you lost me I'm sorry.
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