Sci-fi Generic Environement

ayoub44

Hi guys
i'm working on my second environement ^^ on UDK
based on that work for Aaron Foster




so , i start my scene with blocking



i think is good :poly141:

willy-wilson

Are you replicating it? Because from what i remember that shots already UDK.

thatnumpty

yea, that source image is already a 3d environment. kinda weird to remake it...

BlvdNights

Sup dawg, I herd you liek 3d art.....

Mind

Yeah really no interest to remake it , try something by yourself or just with a great artwork. it will be better for your learning

Emil Mujanovic

I don't see the problem here... No one criticizes a 2D artist for re-painting an existing 2D painting or painting from a photograph. They are studies and are good for practice and developing muscle memory.

If ayoub44 wants to re-create an existing 3D piece as a study or learning exercise then it seems perfectly fine as far as I'm concerned.


As for the art, I don't have much to crit yet, as you've only started the block in phase. Just keep at it.

jimmypopali

I'd have to agree with Emil, even though they used 3D to make the concept, its still a concept. It's like people re-making game environments like Mario levels.

Just one thing I noticed and I know you're only blocking out, but just check the height on the pillar bases. They seem to be a big higher in the concept. Also watch the circle part on the side of the base, looks a little small.

Looking forward to seeing your progress.

willy-wilson

The only reason i stated that is because i didn't know if he was trying to recreate it or maybe thought it was a concept and not 3d.

Jungsik

GOGOGO~ !!

Razorb

nooooooooooooooooooooooo ayoub! you chose such a crappy pic to do an environment of ! should of told me :P i would of strayed you off it heh.. dont know if this is any better.. but its the old concept i drew before i made that one.. tis really old

Purplepaint

Emil Mujanovic wrote: »

I don't see the problem here... No one criticizes a 2D artist for re-painting an existing 2D painting or painting from a photograph. They are studies and are good for practice and developing muscle memory.

If ayoub44 wants to re-create an existing 3D piece as a study or learning exercise then it seems perfectly fine as far as I'm concerned.


As for the art, I don't have much to crit yet, as you've only started the block in phase. Just keep at it.

this.

Also i really enjoy the original, so i wouldn't mind watching it get re created.

ayoub44

hi guys

i'm starting working on concept aaron give me thanks

ayoub44

i make some lighting in the scene and i start texturing

Snader

Yeah the textures look way too lowres/blurry.

I also don't think you should make those pillars out of a single box - at the very least chamfer the corners and add the cylinder/nut at the bottom as actual geo ...wait - you had those nuts modeled, did you remove them or are they just very badly visible?

ayoub44

i fix lighting and texturing ! i'm not good on texturing

ok , this is it @_@

ayoub44

start texturing the ground

3DVlad

Floor texture looks too simple and too low-rez to me... why not give it more texture space, and use some photo-ref textures for defining your surfaces... It would give it more realism... Also are you changing the color scheme of the concept? (there is no blue in the original that's why I'm asking)

ayoub44

:thumbup: i fix it !

add some noise on the texture , still need more details

ayoub44

floor texture



CC please

Bibendum

Use a tiling texture for the floor. Preferably without stretching it that much.

ayoub44

last update

please CC

BlvdNights

Your textures are way too blurry. Do you even have any normals or spec on it?

cyberflame

the ground texture is too big try scaleing it down it may reduce the blurryness somewhat

Irreal

I don't get why you've made the textures that low res. They look like they've been done with a felt tip.

Snader

You're currently being very inefficient with texturing the environment as a whole instead of using a modular approach. Though if you wish to use your current method - you should at least put some more effort into texturing.

ayoub44

I fix lines .. .. but about the other things .. i don't understand wath you mean ^^"