Cartoony mafia thug

TH98

Hey guys, I'm doing my first human head model and it's very stylized which I know is a bad way to start but it's for a mod so



Anyway, the meshflow doesn't look very pretty to me at all, so if yall have some suggestions I'd be chuffed. After that I shall require help pelt mapping it, cause I tried an the results were str8 disastrous.

Mainly just looking for topology crits

PS it's built around this mudbox sculpt my brother made

TH98

http://www.moddb.com/mods/tales-from-the-galactopticon/images/donny-the-cut-as-youve-never-seen-him-before#imagebox

there. This is hard on an iPhone lolzords

TH98

Anyone?

Bueller?

Bueller?

Rhinokey

it looks nice cool style, something about the eyes tho seems too large even for the style, maybe seeing it textured would help

shame not getting any responses, guess people are too busy

iansmithartist

The topology between the mouth and the nose could do with some tweaking. Generally, as I understand it, you want to aim for nice even sized quads, in several places you have some loops that have the quads either stretched or squashed.

I looked around at other peoples models to get an idea for what I should be aiming for

This is by Mashru Mishu, and while its a realistic head, the topology of the head in the first frame might help.



Also the lower cheek/jaw area, working out some better edge flow so that the loops flow down from the eye and down around the bottom of the jaw.