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Nate Broach polycounter lvl 17
So I just made a huge update to my portfolio site. Got rid of all the old 3D stuff and added new (2D section however stayed the same...). I would love to hear some feedback and critiques on it. Im getting ready to go job hunting and want this to be looking its best.

www.alter-nate.com

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  • Tumerboy
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    Tumerboy polycounter lvl 17
    Nice work and Nice site. It took me a minute to realize that the texture sheets were associated with the model to their left, I would consider grouping them more. All you'd have to do is remove the spacing between the model & sheet, but leave the spacing around each pair. I think that would help.

    As for the work, it's very nice. I would recommend picking an object or two and doing some LODs for it. A lot of companies have Automatic LOD generation now, but it's always good to know how to do it the old fashion way. And it's usually pretty easy.

    Oh and also, if you have the time/desire, it would be good to get an entire scene or two in there too. Nothing huge, but make a little world for your gas can to sit in, or a high school hallway for the locker. Someplace for your models to live, it makes a big difference, even if it's not the main focus.
  • Cubik
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    Cubik polycounter lvl 18
    You need to do more with your normalmaps. Try your hand at some organic highpoly modeling. The statue would really benefit from better normals. Or you could do a beat-up highpoly version of the locker and redo your spec map (try some color in it, look at tinmans stuff) to see the technque in use.

    All of your work still suffers from not having enough dirt and damage where you would expect it, look at the small crevices and edges of your works. There is almost no overlapping dirt, dent, scratches, sunbleaching or anything between uv parts. Look at where the inner wall meets the floor in the landing craft. Shouldn't there be some water damage, dirt, oil or just about anything here?
    A good idea would be to get a 3d painter software and either paint dirt directly in it, or do a new layer in the texture and just paint some distinct color to show which areas that connect to what on the uv.

    Getting something inside an engine to show that you understand the process (and it gives you the ability to work with the its lights, enviroment mapping and more to spice up the final look of the model) is never a bad thing. I also think its a good idea because your work it might be seen as more real (as in harder to fake the actual result) vs a render in the software of your choice. Plus what tumer said about levels.

    Put in something about texturesizes somewhere in those images.
  • RazorBladder
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    RazorBladder polycounter lvl 18
    like Cubik said, I'd group the render & texturemap thumbnails closer together, perhaps even the same image with a thin black dividing line between them.
    Most of the normalmaps seem kinda pointless, it's like previous gen texturing but with some additional texturemaps that really don't do a lot.
  • Nate Broach
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    Nate Broach polycounter lvl 17
    Hey I really appreciate the critiques. I changed the spacing like you suggested. And yea I agree about the normal maps, I was just making do with what I know (which is a basic knowledge of the Nvidia filter and very very limited zBrush). If I was to make a high poly mesh to normal map onto a low poly as you suggested Cubik, what would be the process? Would I start with the low poly and then make it high poly? or vice versa?

    And as for the dirt, Ill definately go back and make another pass on all the textures and do what you suggested. Ill also go back and add texture sizes.

    And lastly about the LOD's. What the workflow on that? how many polys do you shave off per LOD? Most of this stuff is pretty new to me.

    Anyways thanks for the help so far. smile.gif
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