3D Character-Dipesh Patel

dipesh25

Hey everyone so i decided to work on a new 3D character, here's a link of the concept art i'll be working off.

https://www.artstation.com/artwork/RBvPy

The reason i'm gonna start posting my WIP here is so i can hopefully get good some critiques and feed backs

dipesh25

Here's a screenshot of the face. 



Sculpting the hair now, not my strongest area, a lot more tuning is required.

 
We'll keep you updated !

Adrien_Marcastel

Hey, 
The face is too flat, try to respect the curvature of the different areas, mouth and all. 


Also, the chin is too much caved in, the pose in the concept make it look like it's inward but the mouth is out more than the forehead.

Good luck! 

dipesh25

Block in of the characters anatomy . 

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Blocking in the clothes for the character

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Update: sculpted folds on the shirt and blocking out the fur on the side jacket.  so far so good.

JimmyRustler

@Adrien_Marcastel is right. The face really need some love, try to focus on them a little bit more. Use that reference because its show you the basic proportionally correct head shapes.

You really need to work more on the anatomy again, before going further with the cloth, because body proportion affect them and yours look a bit off.

dipesh25

-jimmy Rustler
-Adrien Marcastel

Thanks for the feedback guys really appreciate it, i agree the face does need more work, i'll update this page ASAP hopefully with some improvements  

dipesh25

Here's a update for the head, made some tweaks here and there. 
Decided to paint in the eyes for now just so i can have a much clearer picture as a whole.

Elithenia

Even though you are covering the ear with hair, do sculpt it in so that you can see how the face works together as a whole. As it is a quite important landmark, it is important to have it so gauge the distances and placements of the rest of the facial features. 

Be careful with the eyes. He's currently looking surprised as you can see almost the entire iris... 

dipesh25

Elithenia- Appreciate the feedback  

dipesh25

Here's what i've done on it so far..

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Another WIP shot

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WIP Shot 

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Here's the finished HP sculpt.

 I made a design change where i  completely got rid of the shoulder armour. i thought design wise it didn't make sense at all to have that sort of 'heavy' looking equipment for a archer.   

This way i feel like the character is more balanced.