I figured I would try to get as many eyes on this as possible, I'm currently working on my entry for Cubebrush's Art War!
A bit of lore for those who are into that:
On a distant desert-like planet, there exists a race of humanoid beings
that have a close mystical tie to unique, liquid-bearing stones. These
opal-like stones are believed to be the elixir of the stars and
consuming the liquid can alter your perception of space, enabling you to
see and manipulate illusions. The desert dwelling race, who’s name
roughly translates to “Opal Eaters” used the illusionary power to build
and shield their civilization, however technological travelers threaten
to destroy what they have built and steal the stones for themselves.
Normally passive, the Opal Eaters must now fight back if they wish to
Feedback and critiques are always appreciated!