Goblin character

jaysonmtl

Hi polycount here is my latest character
More pics on art station https://www.artstation.com/artwork/re4dO

Thanks for looking

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pmiller001

Cool! this reminds me of something from Styx: master of shadows. 

jaysonmtl

Hey thanks! Yea Styx was a reference

theStoff

Looks good @jaysonmtl . I do feel though that the details are a little muddy. Your broad shapes look nice but there aren't many hard edges around. Besides that I'd say work on you lighting and presentation a bit. Right now the lighting seems to be mostly ambiance which is washing a way a lot of the form.

kaiceps

nice work. I think you need a bit more definition on the tricept/bricep and the brachioradialis area. His delts is more refined so would make sense to work on the arms a bit more. 

jaysonmtl

@theStoff Hey thanks for the crits, maybe I should go for a more harsh lighting setup to try and pop some more details out. The pics do look a bit muddy I agree, when I look at him in Marmoset he looks nice and sharp tho so maybe I should render at a different resolution or apply a sharpen filter. These are rendered out at max settings.

@kaiceps Thanks Kaiceps, youre right his deltoids are pretty buff compared to his biceps and brachioradialis area, I wanted a skinny look with a bit of defenition so im thinking maybe I should just tone down his delts to match with the rest. thanks for the crits