Female Elf Sorceress - WIP

travisdreams

Hey Guys,

Its been awhile since i've posted on here. Recently graduated from school so i was on a little vacation. Though i'm back on the grind and began to work on a new portoflio piece. I had a previous thread giving critiques on my website so i plan to remove some work and change the entire thing to cater towards Character Work.

I found a very intesreting concept by an artist with the name "Datouxiaozuo"

Concept:



Here's my WIP of the character. Wondering if i should approach it in a realistic style or a handpainted style. Any ciritques/feedback is welcome!

Heather_Bea

I really like what you have so far, gorgeous! I do not know characters at all so I don't have a critique for you, but I look forward to seeing more. ^_^

JordanN

Did you really have to put chromatic aberration on a WIP? That's something you save till the end.

Jeffrotull

giggity

Fnitrox

need more lens flares... but anyway It's looking pretty solid so far.

I'd watch some proportions as the gloves are looking a bit small and she seems a bit too top heavy (if you know what i mean) also the cheeks might be too puffy.

Anyway keep it up i love that concept!

almighty_gir

she's got these really... puffy cheeks under her eyes, like she's been stung by a bee or has really bad allergies or something.

Texelion

I'd say the boobs are a bit too big, bigger than the concept, they make her head look smaller.

I like her face from the side view, really cute, but yeah I agree with the others for the cheeks on the 3/4 view.

travisdreams

Been quite awhile, had a hectic week recently but here is my current progress on the character Planning to add more details to the armor (scratches, dents, etc) , Retexture the skin, and Add some sculpted detail to the face.

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated as i'm currently adding details and making adjustments.

BagelHero

Looking pretty dope, but adjust the placement of the ear (It should be at the top of the jaw, at the moment it's kind of floating a bit too far up and behind).
Actually, while I'm looking closely, the ear anatomy seems pretty off, with no real foundation in reality. I suggest you do some ear studies and rework it.

Looking forward to seeing the end result!

Edrice

Looking good, but as said above, cheeks and ears need work.

Tits

Looking good! Will follow the progress for sure!
I agree with what the other artist told you about aldready,
The cheeks looks a little bit too puffier, try to soften the shape over there. The ear looks a bit weird, especially at the base.
Otherwise only nit picking here. But the back of her shoes is going wat too far back behing the actual heal, That would actually be really weird to walk back with and very uncomfortable. I think the heal is placed at the right place, just bring back the back of the shoes to fit with it.

TAN

Nice work so far.

The waist seems to be thinner also by the way.