hand painted & stylized stuff by Fenyce

Fenyce

Hello everyone!

I thought about creating a work thread here in P&P to get some feedback and useful critic to improve my stuff. So here it is!

Thanks and bye!

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Latest WIP will be here soon
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Fenyce

This is a weapon I'm currently working on, based on a concept piece I did a while back (but I did some changes to it and still need to add some small parts)




Concept:

Fenyce

That's how it's looking right now:




And I did two more textures the past 2 days:

This one is still a little messy

and this one is inspired by Jamin Shoulets tutorials:

Tobbo

The painting on the textures is really fantastic! I would try and add more color variation though. Keep it up!

Ferum

The sword looks really good. Personally I'd add a bit stronger highlights in the golden parts to bring out the edges more. You might try this with changing mode of your brush to Linear Dodge. The bricks could use some more detail and color variation, like Tobbo said.

Fenyce

Thank you Tobbo and Ferum!

I updated the sword and did brighten the highlights a little more.

Fenyce

Started some shingles


tiled:

Jeff Parrott

Nice shingles! Maybe some value variation then start to introduce some additional hues. Your value range is pretty limited it seems. Which sort of works for clay shingles. If it's supposed to be a different material though maybe adjust that.

Fenyce

some progress:

I think I'll call it done for now.

And I started a wall texture...

stevston89

For the roof texture I think it is a bit too uniform and you could push the color variation more. Here is a quick paint over it's a bit subtle, but I think it will help a lot.

Fenyce

Thank you stevston89!
I did as you suggested. Is there anything else I could improve?

Tiled texture:

stevston89

Maybe a bit more contrast but other than that nope it looks great!

Fenyce

I started to work on a little texture set, which I maybe want to sell through Unity Asset Store, we'll see.

Here's one of those textures I'm currenty working on. I'd be thankful for some feedback.

Fenyce

still working on textures...

the one from above again:


And a second one for the set:


C&C is welcome, soooo any advice? Suggestions?