[WIP] Halo:Reach MA37 Assault Rifle

osed

Hello everyone!
I have finally started working on my first real portfolio piece, and of course I am looking for some feedback

*Update*

So I took your feedback and tried to fix the edges and do some minor changes to the size of certain things, haven't had time to fix the area around the magazin jet however..
here comes a shitload of images this time renderd in marmoset




sorry for all this pic spam, Hope you can actually see what is going on on the pictures haha

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This is my high poly version, it will be combined with a height map.




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I will keep the thread updated
thanks for stoping by!

AlexCatMasterSupreme

HA halo is so stupid.
kidding, yeah I think the edges are a bit tight, also that might be your render? Also a lot of those floaters look fairly small and may not bake well or show up more than a few pixels. I feel like overall it feels a bit blocky and missing a lot of the smaller details that will push everything together and connect parts making it look more functional especially around the magazine area. Also a heightmap on a gun might not turn out too well, just use a ton of polys instea, like 10-15k.

RobeOmega

I really like the presentation, what are you using to render this?

RobeOmega

AlexCatMasterSupreme wrote: »

HA halo is so stupid.

I only find this funny because you work at 343i

AlexCatMasterSupreme

Robeomega wrote: »

I only find this funny because you work at 343i

I actually am a massive halo fanboy so keep going at it m8!I think you can make those fixes and it will turn out good

osed

thank you all for the super great feedback!:)
I will defently redo parts of the model, and try to fix the edges and scale up some details
Very useful tips guys!

@Robeomega, @AlexCatMasterSupreme- its just a simple Physical Sun and Sky metal ray render in Maya, as JoshuaG said

maverickhornet

This is super cool! Looking good already and you really nailed the shape. I agree about the edges being too sharp though I think you've got that crit nailed down now.

Perhaps we can see your wires at some point?

Keep it up

osed

@maverickhornet - Thank you
I got u the wires now haha