Pinup wip

HeV

Hello guys,
i always wish to learn new things, that's why i'm trying some high poly rendering which is still a little new for me
so feel free to give me feedbacks and critics !
it's going to be a retro pinup

SirSpangles

looks pretty decent man, I know its the style of the character but the hips are a good bit larger then the rest of the body, I would cut it back just a little.

JR

Love the proportions I wouldn't change anything.

Joopson

Yeah, I love the shapes and proportions here too. Looks very good.
Can't wait to see more!

AzzaMat

The proportions look really good! but she doesn't really look like a pin up yet.

The legs need to be longer and her waist needs to come in more. You want "Barbie" anatomy :P

JordanLeigh

Her calf muscles look really short. Kinda reminds me of a horses legs. And I think you might want to pull her torso in a little bit more. She looks a little bloated to me

Leinad

I think the overall proportions look good. personally, I would slightly soften the knee, it looks a bit sharp. But outside of that, if you're planning on posing her for a beauty shot after you're done then I'd knock out a quick pose and see if it works with the current proportions.

Keep it up!

HeV

thanks for all your feedbacks !
i will probably slightly change a couple things now

HeV

small update
thanks again for the critics
i hope you'll like it !

fatihG_

I'm loving this! =D

However something about the lower body just looks off to me. Its probably the legs, they look too long for my tastes.

Or it might be cause of her figure, she almost looks chubby and having her legs be skinny just looks a bit off.

Also, her hands look a bit on the small side as well.

KristaW

I love this style. Very nicely done wrinkles.

theDEAD

Ugh... Guess I might be the troll here, but...

Azzamat's... are you using a reference of a pinup girl from a contemporary concept rendition of a pinup? That seems stupid to me... especially if he's trying to nail the look of a traditional pinup girl. To me, there is striking visual difference between the two.

In other words, I don't think the 2nd concept photo you posted is a great example of a pinup girl in terms of form for a traditional pinup girl. Does it look like a pinup girl? Sure. But not the old school style... imo. Those HIPS.... I mean... what hips?

AzzaMat

The second image is a modern take on old pin ups. The others aren't. But generally it completely depends on what era HeV is targeting, retro is a bit vague considering how long pin up has been around. I still think the character generally doesn't look like a pinup

sheckee

I dunno, I could see her working as a Pin-Up. But I'm a sucker for those big thighs!
It depends on the composition/ pose that HeV goes for. I think the main thing to remember is that she needs to be 'doing something'. Her outfit doesn't convey anything to me, so I'm a bit unsure of that. The Shorts feel Nautical, but the top could be anything. Maybe a diner waitress?

HeV

hey back guys
little update with pose and i'm just trying a couple things with renders

makecg

nice one

ysalex

It's a great render and you're doing fantastic with your clothes, but the width of the arms combined with their length make her look like a midget. Or small person. Whichever she finds less offensive.

HeV

hey guys
it has been a while since last update but i've been pretty busy this last month.
so there's pinup's next wip
hope you'll like it

Texelion

I agree with Ysalex, the arms are definitely too short, and the hands a bit small too. Everything else is awesome, love the pose. How did you pose her ?

HeV

thanks for the feedback
i have longer the arms a bit already compared to the previous wip.

spiderDude

Fantastic job!
As stated before the arms and hands are the weakest point right now. Also, I'm not sure if its just the angle, but her left knee looks to be turning more inward compared to her foot which is pointing forward. Other than that, everything looks golden.

Shiniku

Looking good! I really dig this.

lotet

Oh my god, I love this, esp the hair, its sooo good.
the eyes look a bit creepy though.

Popol

Waw! I love the proportions your chose and the hair is gorgeous. Great work!

LRoy

really well done

HeV

thanks for your comments it's very encouraging ! i have increased the hands a little bit more
i'm not sure about the eyes yet heh

HeV

hello guys
There's next update, i'm almost done with this i guess. Feel free to give me any suggestion/advice before i completely finish it !

DougClayton4231

Fantastic work! The only thing that I think could add to the scene is a slightly lower intensity on the rim light.

Wex

Gorgeous overall, but those arms are really too short!

Tits

so pretty!

Joltya

Looks cool! I'd really like to see a larger render!

HeV

thanks for the comments, yes the rim light definitely needs some adjustment

Suba

Love the render. Maybe that's just me but I have that feel she is gonna break her ankles, they are a bit too thin imo.

Dazz3r

amazing, love the style!

CougarJo

Super boulot sur le perso , j'aime beaucoup Par contre , je trouve que la sc

HeV

Hey guys !
i have changed my mind about the background and cameback to my original idea.
i'll go for high resolutions renders i guess now ! i really need to move to something else haha.
Thanks for all feedbacks, were really helpful

CougarJo

Je pr

HeV

oui c'est une bonne id

CougarJo

Oui je comprends. C'est juste moi qui ressens un d

almighty_gir

celle derriere!

CougarJo

almighty_gir : Haha Google transtale? xD But I see what you mean

almighty_gir

yeah lol, my french is terrible... i had great fun with it at disneyland though!

i kept holding my daughter (who was one year old) up to the desks, and speaking "through her" haha.

"Bonjour madamme! Je suis Tyria, je suis une ans et je suis les enfent terrible!!!!"

so many "AAAAAAAAAAWWWWS!" haha. but yeah, my french is shit.

CougarJo

I can totally picture the scene in my head

I don't think I'll be more comfortable than you when I'll be in my first real life situation with only non-french speaker haha!


I still recall when Luxologie called me because I've tried Modo, it was terrible xD

Texelion

The stairs scene makes more sense yeah, nice job.

DougClayton4231

@HeV: J'aime beaucoup le nouveau sc

HeV

thanks for trying to speak french everyone !
and thanks for the new feedbacks, the render has been done with 3Ds max and Vray

HeV

so there are final renders, again thanks everyone for the help and i hope you'll like it !

Noors

Puisqu'on peut parler fran

Geno527

Rah je suis fan, elle est vraiment parfaite.J'aimais bien aussi l'id

spiderDude

Very beautiful!

CougarJo

J'adore, vraiment du beau boulot! J'aime beaucoup la peau!