an other Temple Scene CE3
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Hey guys, I am working on this scene for a while. It still needs some love in mapping, texturing and lighting. Please feel free to give some critics. Next update will be the Vegetation maybe some tesselation on the tree trunks.
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You are really close to something really awesome though, maybe try some matte paintings on some of your screens to figure out some ideas.
made a really fast paint over to explain myself beter.
About the stairs I think I will ad a texture for it and have an vertex color pass on the scene to avoid loosing details.
Its somewhat blurry at times, try get some more depths in the shadows, other than that i think this is amazing
What if you tried slightly reddish bricks? It might make them stick out a little better.
You could make the underside of the rocks wet and briney as well with barnacles and things?
Love that last pic with the ocean! Great ToD!
Straight into the inspiration folder ^^
I am aiming for something like this for the light mood:
I think it is looking really nice - However, I agree with the above comments of nothing really standing out. Not that your modeling is bad, I think the scene looks great. I mostly think that the lighting could be more inspired and you could use some color to draw focus in the scene.
Take a look at this Uncharted 2 screenshot and note a few things:
A) Without the red color, that boxcar hanging from the cliff would blend almost completely with the background.
I think this is something that would REALLY make your scene pop out more. I strongly advise you to add some vertex coloring on top of your materials and see what that results in, if it doesn't quite work, I think that you should rework your textures to have some more colors in them other than that brown hue.
Once that is done post some screenshots and let us have a look! But I think that will go a VERY long way to making your scene pop more.
By adding some color to the hidden pathway on the right side of it you can also direct focus there.
Keep up the great work!
Alright this is neat, but there are some big issues.
keep it up!
At the moment I am doing some overpaints to define the colors and overall mood better. I post some progress images soon.
Thanks for your comments.
When I saw this pic, reminds me of my own artwork. I am feeling "artworkception" now :poly142:
I dont want to post it here, I feel ashamed. Btw, your scene looks awesome
But I did want to say you should name your thread titles better than "an another temple scene CE3" That isnt appealing at all. When I first read it, it seemed that you were already uninterested with your scene since its just "another temple scene", so if your uninterested why would other people? Its the same thing a lot of people run into when making sci fi corridors, they just name it sci fi corridor. That isnt interesting, setting you apart or would make someone want to click to see what your working on.
You could have the most super badass temple scene ever but a lot of people might skip checking it out because the thread title sounds generic and boring and would assume so is the work. Even something simple like "Crumbling Overgrown Temple CE3" is a lot more interesting and I think would make more people inclined to take a peek.
Just some food for thought
For the next Thread I post, I will think about the headline more.
If you don't mind I would appreciate some comments about the scene itself. Maybe PM: Thanks a lot
I am still lack of proper gloss and spec maps for most of the materials. This is my next goal.