Agreed, she needs a little touch of femininity. Also how you have built the crotch is like a bent tube :/, give that some loving. Also there are none of the actual hip forms. If you give us a bigger view of the model as it is now i will happily give a paintover :).
Thanks for the crits everybody. Ok, in between applying for roughly one hojillion* jobs in the past couple days I managed to take everybody's input into consideration and make the minor changes that hopefully give her a more femine look. @ d00kie : I slightly synched in her waist and widened her shoulders and rounded out…