linkov basicly said every smart thing there is to say here =P but this is the short version; if two single tubes is the only thing comunicating he is an engineer ur in trouble with your design mate ^.^
Yeah this is better, in a way. It goes from dark to lighter, but it's missing any real bright bits. I'd lighten the bamboo chestpiece a bit, and swap the black shoulder tubes out for some more crystals or something else brightish.