lol, idk I just like the movie, should I have something else? Anyway the issue is the high poly is being projected incorrectly. You can see the dorsum of the nose is being spread wide. I gathered it is because of how deep the nose is there in comparison to the low poly so it stretches out, but it also obviously doesnt…
Idk, for me it's hard to judge my works based on passive video watching or something. Having mentor, or just other experienced telling you specifically what was wrong and how to improve is different.