Your images don´t work. It would be better to upload them to a third party hoster and just hotlink them with the image tag :) Ahh... and black text on grey background isn´t a good idea ;)
im having problems getting my images to show up on the forum. ive tried using code and the image attachment link. they don't seem to be showing up on the forum. What am I doing wrong?
Nice work, I dig the little dents and scratches but I agree Adam about the text in your images. They could be nice if this was for an in game informative image but for modeling presentation, just the model would do better.
http://img170.imageshack.us/my.php?image=headwip20li.png And with edged faces: http://img170.imageshack.us/my.php?image=headwip30oj.png Are these better? Sorry for the delay - I wanted to make some changes. Still need suggestions though.
Here are a few WIPs. They are far from being the prettiest images, but I believe that they are good to show how much the project changed along the way (and I'm posting them separately to not flood the main post with too many images)
Well, it's not designed to show them alone. After all, if you draw over it you're still hiding a bit of the original thing you're trying to make a point about. It's more like "go back and look at these parts in the original image you posted". I thought using lines that way would highlight them a little better than just a…
Im surprised you went with the first image as your more polished render. The bottom Left image has the most interesting information going on with the dock and stuff. Ide maybe work on making composition that keeps that in the frame.
Workshop link: http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=693783905 Final images: Key art: Workbench Screenshots: Texture sheet: Reference images: Some of my greeble meshes used for baking: Hope you like it :)
Your proportions seem off. Did you use reference images aside from that one? That specific image you provided is harder to read. Most notable areas being the carry handle on top and the barrel area.
the Dos Equis commercial was actually a royalty free image I found (atleast, the website that is suppose to only have have royalty free images had it). Buuuuut....I'll try to find a more futuristic commercial to insert. :)