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Re: Werewulfthingy
Haha, if it doesn't cut the mustard all the more reason to post, get critiques from some of the best. THat's why I post here. As for your model, posting the polycount of it as well as a wireframe would be very helpful. The model shape lacks a lot of deffinition, and the texture is very plain, it could use a fair amount of… -
Re: [Portfolio] - Jacob Norris
I disagree with this as I know of someone who's literally got a career going because of the cardboard box he did. I'm glad you got the lighthouse on the frontpage as it is definitely your best piece so far, i'd just ditch everything else that you did in the past like the matrix, dino stuff. Stick with environments and… -
Re: New website design.first pass
I like the design, I have a few crits if u don't mind You have some great models on the website. Instead of clicking Wire or Tex, could make it a rollover. The first image would be the textured model and rollover into wireframe. Also, you can obviously texture very well, so why not show the visitors your texture maps. That… -
Re: Issue with UVs?
Turn the normal map off and re-render - what do you get? This will help to determine if it is a normal map issue or a geometry issue. Check your elements, flipped normals on export/import, and make sure that the polygons are on the proper material ID. Those are just a couple off the top of my head. Maybe making it all one… -
Re: Buttocks help
I could use some help in this area as well. I've looked around a bit and there don't seem to be many tutorials the focus soley on the butt area. The connection between the legs is really funky on almost every character I've built. Gotten better just by looking at other wireframes and such, maybe that's all I can do… -
Re: Game Enviroment (Night Shot)
your demo looks cool to me man, nice stuff ;) Only thing is that you could blend your wireframes into the footage of each piece and not just a quick slideshow at the end. Regarding your current environment right here, i think that your logs don't need that vertex in the middle of a cylinder cap. also you could have 1-2… -
Completed - Kazuhira Miller - Critique Required
I've finally completed my first 3d character. https://www.artstation.com/artwork/L4gGnl The purpose of this project is to create a game-ready character to showcase on my portfolio. This is my first 3d project but I have been learning 3d for a while now. The reason I'm making this post is because I'm self taught and I… -
Re: Gloster Meteor
@Bostvic Yeah, moving on to a different part of the model can be often good for mental health. I don't know much about modeling this kind of shapes, but what I would suggest is to give a little more space between the vertices right here: It might make the transition softer, it might not, just a thought... You could also… -
Re: So I'm a shit artist...(Mentor Wanted)
I don't think you are giving yourself enough credit for your work. It's far from sh****! Every artist I've known runs into a wall at some point and there are many ways to deal with it. In your case, I think your work is being let down by the presentation. What is going on in the background of the E11 pistol? Are there 2… -
Re: Portfolio/showreel update
The site functions just fine, there are no problems in terms of navigation. In terms of your work, I would maybe add texture sheets and wireframe shots for your gas pump and pick-up truck. Also is the 2nd gas pump supposed to be facing the other way? As it seems too clean on the back, in comparison to the rest of the…
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