I was finding that my flight cycle was looking more like an idle and needed some real finesse so that it was readable as flying without having to move her forward. I have begun to animate elements of her to give more of a feeling of wind rushing past and creating more drag on her limbs.
Oh sweet man coming along nicely. I particularly like that webbing between her arms You`ll have to do some trickery with color to make her stand out a bit I assume. On the other hand, you could *whispers* - give her bigger boobies -_- *flies away*
I think the pose could be made way more dynamic and awesome by extending the motion till her throwing arm crosses either one side of her body or the other (depending on if she's throwing it backhanded or not). That way it would break of the silhouette and give you a great eye lead towards her face.
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I think your torso is a tad too long and thus her crotch too low, making her legs seem short. She also seems to be leaning forward, with center of gravity on her toes. (usually that's the effect of wearing highheels. but yours' wearing flats) Bellybutton and elbows don't align. Keep at it
Really liking what you've done to the costume a lot. Big improvement over the prototype on the 1st post. Any side shot ? Her hips seem a little .... flat. Her hairline seems too far back and it looks like she doesn't have enough cranium. And please give her eyebrows.
I agree. Alyx isn't very well rendered in that piece and she's kind of distracting--the piece isn't about her, so I didn't want to spend too much time on her, but I probably ought to have or taken her out entirely. Oh well. It's all been about learning.
This was actually a concept I had worked on before when I was way less skilled, so I'm re-working it This and the next post; my pseudo design sketch (where she's standing with her arms out next to her pet) 2 composition sketches, I would have done more but I fell in love with the second one the mostly completed sketch of…
Her face is amazing, haha. Love the style! For the lips perhaps have it protrude just a little bit more to stress and feel the pursed/puckering? Chin feels a little small as well. I like where you're going with her wavy short hair-do! Her eye color is interesting and spot on. :)
I've modified the face, added the eyes, the hair are just for fun (I don't want to see her bald anymore)the final hair will be different Thank you Mixamo for the observation I've added the muscle between the shoulder and the breast next I want change her staff to suit more with her style