Nice start! Here's my take (beyond what you've already heard): What's your story? Why is there almost no furniture? What's in the boxes? Why are drugs out in the open? Why is it messy? Do they own a trash can? Why or why not? You don't have to answer all the questions, but it's the sort of thing you should consider when…
First of all, there was no need to open a new thread for this, and secondly, this question simply was not solved by the concept artist. It's up to you, and you have gotten at least two suggestions on how this could look in the other thread. A third would for example be a more gradual approach with the cuts starting thin…