I usually set angle of view to 90 for accuracy. OK, now for comments. PERSONALLY, I think this model needs a lot of work. First is the 14K polycount. For what you have, that can be greatly reduced. I can't tell without wires but I think you have polys in places that are unnecessary and don't have enough in other places,…
kaburan: Thanks. I've re-sculpted her torso some more. Don't think I'm too happy with this one either. LRoy: I'm glad you like it. Thanks! :D ScoobyDoofus: Thanks for your comments. I also thought her head was a bit too large, but I'm thinking it's perspective or something. She is exactly 7 1/2 heads tall. *shrug* I wanted…
I really like this and your 'desert raver' model, and I applaud your rebellion from the usual themes. I like the clothing on this chick more than the original 'candy raver' one. I remember the reference photos for this model, and the girl is extremely pretty, and not in a heavy-eye-shadow way. I wish a little more of her…
I am almost sure that her arms are too short for her body also hand is almost the same length as forearm(remember hand should be as long ad her face - chin to hair line or 6/7 ) , her belly is too wide and clavicle have strange concave curve , some of medial knee volume is missing also her jaw definitely need some fixing…
nice start, rav3. Her right hand looks like it could use a little tweaking. The finger looks like she's depressing the trigger, and her thumb is hidden in a somewhat unnatural way. It also looks like you could accentuate the curve on her belt and the bottom of her coat a little more, it is kind of flattening out her hips.…
Finished making most of the changes I want. Next update will be much farther along, closer to the final paint and pose. I added more red to the leather and deepened it a bit due to it blending into her skin when trying out lighting and highlights. Added teal striping to break up the yellow, and a touch of orange to the…
thank yous! @crazyfool - I softened the neck and tweaked the shoulder blade a bit. @nizza - yep, the polypaint is mostly gradiation; I filled it all one color, then put some orange on her outer limbs, then put the dirt/paint dark colors in there, then colored her torso a little lighter. Folds are being worked on also!…
I guess I come at this very differently. I'll pause for a second and tell a story about a 3 people I know it will explain my position on this. I know 3 deaf people, very talented artists. 1 is legally deaf but she can hear with super hearing aids but then its not so great. 2 and 3 have been deaf from birth and both have…
Maybe if we were talking about an exemplary and complete portfolio, then we could nitpick the layout and presentation creativity. If your work is strong, your work is strong. That will make you stand out much more than any spiced up layout. I think the critique should focus on the quality of the art pieces because her…
While it doesn't look too bad, I can't help but say she looks very masculine. Females are Slender and more graceful than males. She looks overly athletic. Her face makes her look old too. And those breasts are massive. I mean super huge, damn son. Her shoulders are wider than her waist, which gives her a very masculine…