First off, the architecture and layout look great to me, I dig that mysterious red like coming from the inside. I think the scenery catches the eye nicely and I get a nice Thief/Dark Mod vibe from this. However, the sky is extremely contrasted while the cathedral really fades in the fog. This should be the other way around…
the problem is simply that the crystals are drawing all the attention and the entrance... just doesn't look like one. Adjusting the values and introducing a light there (or ghostly figure, whatever) is a good start, but u need to push the details there. Ur eye would want to go there, ur mind venture inside, ur curiosity…
I'm going to be working on this again seeing as I'm not doing much. Here's the redesign of the hologram machine, texture not yet 100%. There will be a couple other computers on the platform with it. The WIP high-poly for the hangar door beneath the control room. A scissor lift for the testing area, floating geo and all.…
Good feedback from @Brian%20"Panda"%20Choi and kudos for acting on it @darthcora22. I'm not sure if you'll keep going on this scene or move onto something else, but the lighting would be another area to address with pretty big gains in the overall quality of the image. Take all of Brian's comments about story and apply…
The Songbird For as long as Sona could remember,
the birds had loved her music as much as she had loved theirs. Swooping outside
the window was a lovely blue songbird, trilling its love to the world. With
each beat of its wings a new verse spilled forth and Sona could not help but
mimic it back, her fingers strumming the…
As Trackmania Sunrise will hit the stores soon (April 6th 2005 in Europe), you'll be able to make you own custom cars (within the limitations). I consider that the same as a "PPM" , but with a car mesh. Trackmania has a strong multiplayer component (and a great community), custom skins are already heavily used (especially…
Looking really promising, just a few thoughts moving forward. I'd say the lights could be toned down a bit, they're feeling very hot right now. Maybe those tube lights above the platforms could use some kind of gradient on them, feels like a large surface area of just solid light. Maybe add a tint of colour to the light as…
WIP - Bakes are completed and here is the first lighting pass inside of Unreal. PS : Couldn't post much was busy, recently had a job change. Feel free to drop me some critiques, perhaps on some lighting mainly.
The original painting is now old and I have modified the scene immensely (it's now a scene that takes place at night!!!!!), however, I want to say something about the critique. Before I started, I looked heavily for a lot of photo references that were similar in both the actual scene (Toronto King Street) and lighting set…
Thanks for the suggestions you're right it is too organise. I will add paint chips and debris , a lot more picture frames and tilt them a bit ....I also think addition of curtains with slight movement from draft will add to scene a few boxes maybe oh yeah thanks for that pic ..it's reminded me to add the light shaft to the…