This is a great project. I'm totally digging on it. It's really refreshing to note a complete absence of lightening-bolt shooting swords and gigantic spiked shoulder armor etc. :) pf
She is looking amazing! One thing i have noticed is that she does look like a teenager if that is what you are going for. Other then that the armor is progressing nicely!
Quick update, retopologized the armor as well as the pointy shell part on his back. Preparing the model for detailing. Still messing around with his face and arms/legs.
Don't be afraid to use multiple pieces. It doesn't need to be a watertight mesh. Also you don't seem to be matching the drawing you made with the chest armor as it is now.
That's not a lot of armor on him. Seems that you didn't really know what to do with his feet, and slapped some boots on there. His forehead looks disturbingly small.