There are all kinds of challenges with the perspective and the layout. Curious to see how everyone is going to tackle it. I can already see a few different ideas.
I love the layout of these pages. You've left nothing to interpretation, which is really good :) And the line work is pretty efficient as well. Nice job!
HDRShop is also great for converting to different types of environment map layouts. I use it pretty often at work going between cubecross and equirectangular.
That's a great point and thank you for the overlay sketch! Honestly storyboards and layouts have always been a weakness. I'm getting better, but definitely not there yet.