Firstly, thanks for the feedback - it's much appreciated! :) ladyknowles: I was initially going to make a sword in the stone kind of setting for the foliage scene but after creating all the assets and the lack of time I had after work, I decided to just leave it like that... I think I'll go back to the idea and add…
This is really neat! I'm curious how you did your skybox? Custom mesh and gradient texture? Additional layers for clouds and stars? Any light you could shed would be great as I'm very much into custom skies these days. I also second Moose's thoughts - the scene tends to overwhelm with color and light for that matter, and…
Too goddamn dark, your lighting needs a blue 'night sky' light and then orange-ish lights for the lanterns. It looks like you've got rough material transitions there on the ground, everything is kind of simplistic and sectioned off. I think your scale might be off as well.
I'm no expert on symbolism, so I may be wrong, but I think a star's meaning depends on it's number of points (at least in U.S. culture). The 5 sided star seems to be the most basic/generic/popular and is used for everything from the Dallas Cowboys (American Football team) to Lucky Charms (breakfast Cereal). If a five point…
I hate FPS and absolutley despised the first FEAR. this is much better It's late at night and like a dummy I turned off all the lights. On top of that I am all alone. Now I am absolutey scared shitless. turned everything to maximum setting and it peforms and looks gorgeous ( Radeon 4850 ) besides the beautiful effects and…
Hello! My name is James Vermillion. I'm a trading card illustrator for Spin Master and Universal Pictures, and I do illustration for comics/publishing as well. I'm looking for more work right now, because job security is always a question for us artists nowadays, and bills are expensive. Feel free to peruse my portfolio,…
Hi NAIMA, The non-detail shot of the grass looks pretty good to me, better than any grass I've ever made (I'm not a grass expert either). The only problem I see right now is the repeating dots. I think the saturation of grass (or any texture) is really a property of light in the natural world, so if your scene is lit like…
I had a few hours this morning to start a model. Since I joined a DoW mod I won't have time to finish it. I might come back to it at some point so crits will be helpful =) It is a night watchman mechanical golem type character.
@Xendance: Thankyou for your comment, is this better? @Fozwroth: Brillant crit Fozwroth, much appreciated. Yep, turned on a few lights after reading your comment, will defiantly go back and change the bark for the next update. I changed the leafs slightly now, i actually intended for them to be quite think so i could…
- That solid black line just divides the space for me, I'd maybe think about removing it, and doing something different. Not that you have to replicate it, but the black/white checker floor tile is definitely charming/classic diner. So maybe removing it from your counter base, and putting it on the floor instead could…